Comments | arkeis07: "Sleeping Beauty" PG-13, DemiLovato/SelenaGomez

arkeis07

"Sleeping Beauty" PG-13, DemiLovato/SelenaGomez

Jan 04, 2011 10:53

Title: Sleeping Beauty
Fandom: Disney RPF
Pairing: Demi-centric, Demi/Selena
Rating:PG-13
Words: ~2500
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction, borrowing real people's personas based on my personal perceptions of them. Not intended for profit or offense.

( Sleeping Beauty, Poisoned and Hopeless )

fiction, rating: pg-13, rpf, ship: demi lovato/selena gomez

Comments 30

thefantasmickah January 5 2011, 03:32:40 UTC

Oh darling. I loved, loved, loved the Sleeping Beauty analogy. Because it just feels so true to me. Demi really seems like that. She can't see what others see, she's dormant.

And I loved the way that there was a lot of self-talk in this. It really is how people talk to themselves, flitting from one topic to the next, not finishing one thought.

Also, I loved the call to Selena. Where it really is hard for her to call Selena, and when she does, she doesn't know what to say, so she rambles. And then she brings up Sleeping Beauty, and then everything is left open so wonderfully.

Love.

arkeis07 March 12 2011, 02:01:37 UTC

I'm only now replying to comments because I just read them again and I'm feeling moved by all the love.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting, this idea just came to me in a powerful rush when I was absently listening to A Perfect Circle, and it moved me just to put everything I was thinking into words. So I'm ecstatic that you liked it.

Love. More.

alexfoster451 January 5 2011, 03:52:29 UTC

This was very well written and nicely told. I enjoyed it very much. Great job! :)

rocktheivories January 5 2011, 05:52:05 UTC

Absolutely beautiful. I re-read it twice because I loved it so much :P.

arkeis07 March 12 2011, 02:02:11 UTC

Thank you so much for reading, and sorry this reply is so late lol.

alphateam101 January 5 2011, 07:42:30 UTC

"even when they’re being total assholes…"

I love that line. It sums up her whole situation perfectly. About all her detractors, people kicking her while she is down, and people talking advantage of her (Aka she who shall not be named). In fact the whole story is amazing. You really have a way with words. I look forward to see more in the future ;)

Alpha

arkeis07 March 12 2011, 02:03:53 UTC

Demi has a lot of assholes in her life. Much like a lot of the teen stars do. I was interested in getting into her mindset of being surrounded by all that negativity, and working her way through it. It's a tough, but fascinating, life she is living.

Thanks for reading (sorry this reply is late).

catzmg1990 January 5 2011, 09:43:24 UTC

“I wish you had kissed me, Selena.”

When I read that line, I just couldn't take it. I never knew such a simple sentence would make me tear up. <3