"Venomous" Rosie/Carter, PPP - G

[arkeis07]

Title: Venomous (part 1)
Fandom: Princess Protection Program
Pairing: Rosie Gonzalez/Carter Mason
Rating: G
Words: ~1390
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction, not intended for profit or offense. I own no rights to the subjects.
prompt: "There's no fucking mountains in Louisiana!!!" and "Rattlesnakes!! We have rattlesnakes!" *not verbatim*

Comments

[the_hidden_kid]

You will continue this, I will throw large objects at you if you don't!

This was great and you did Rosie's voice justice. I do not approve of them not getting along, damn you bitchy Carter! Hence, you must continue!!!!!!!!!!!

P.S. I am trying to get better at leaving comments. So....be happy about me leaving one!

[arkeis07]

I would not appreciate large objects being thrown at me, as much as i appreciate this rare and awesome comment. goodie.

i shall indeed continue.

:D

[demifan90]

Aww Alana.

This was fantastic.

You describe everything so perfectly! And I mean everything! This line right here?
She spins around, her dark hair flying out to blur her vision for a moment, to see Rosie collapsed in the grass, her torso just visible in the high grass. I saw that in my head. I could actually see it. Hell I could see every moment in my head. Carter's focused and determined expression, her cool demeanor and Rosie's scared but brave demeanor. You know that yogurt scene? Where she held her head high while she was thoroughly embarrassed? And when she stopped Carter from going in her place? I kinda saw that here.

“Yes it was only -“ Rosie stops talking as Carter lowers her head and places her lips over the wound and starts sucking. Her hair brushes against Rosie’s leg and the feeling is unfamiliar.
Yea I can see why Rosie doesn't really know the exact reason for her dizziness and lightheadedness ;)

“That kind of reckless running around won’t fly out here. Its dangerous! You could have, like, died! You

[arkeis07]

wow, once again Dre, your comment has left me speechless.

thank you!!! you picked up on every literary piece i worked hard on. goodie!!

i love you dre. for really.

&hearts &hearts &hearts

[sleepy_writer08]

You HAVE to continue this! It was amazing! You did a great job with the characters and I loved every second of this fic. I really do hope you continue because, this was just downright awesome. Also, I don't like the not so happy ending...it made me sad so i'd love you forever and ever if you ever so kindly did what Disney doesn't have balls to do and give us a Carter/Rosie LESBIAN (yup i said it, take that Disney. We saw right through you!) relationship with a happy lovey dovey ending =)

P.S.

"Rosie feels light headed, and she’s not sure if it’s from the venom or Carter."

FAVORITE LINE ♥

[arkeis07]

thank you!

yea, now that i think of it, this fic definitely doesn't feel finished.

thank you, i like that line too.

[yummyhippomeat]

*gasp*

i luuuurve PPP fics! cos lets face it the movie was seriously gay.

continue or i shall send my solar powered killing sheep after you

[arkeis07]

solar powered sheep intrigues me greatly, but i will be continuing this, so im afraid i wont get to see them :(

thank you!!!!

[arkeis07]

I AM SO GLAD YOU LOVED IT! AND YOU DON'T HAVE TO BEG. I CAN SEE STUFF, IN MY HEAD. ITS COOL.

Yes, chris was all pissed about the mountains in the movie, since they aren't any in Lousiana, and then i was all "wellerz, wats do you haz dere?" and she was all ".....cows. And rattlesnakes." and then BAM, snake bites hit me. :D i love my thought process :DDDDDD

wow, really? you got the tingles from that? wasnt intending on that but hey, AWESOME. They'll get a little more touchy once they are friends - like, really a lot more touchy.

lool, converse. for srs.

<3<3 &hearts