RPF - Jessie James/ Marion Raven [Singers]

[arkeis07]

Title: Nights in the Industry
Fandom: RPF - Singers
Pairing: Jessie james / Marion Raven
Rating: pg -13
Words: ~1700
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction, borrowing real people's personas based on my personal perceptions of them. Not intended for profit or offense.

Note: this was made for micked18 for making me a very nice gay Demi rainbow background. I

Comments

[demifan90]

Alana...you are my hero. i seriously want to be able to write as well as you. You pulled me in and had me with every single word. I didn't know who these girls were before but i'm very glad that there are pictures :D Seriously, this is amazing. And that very last line? Perfection.

[arkeis07]

WOW. your comment made me squee in rl. like really.

thank you sooo much! i try to keep myself in the world of my story as best as possible, because that is what translates to the reader. so it could be like simple stuff like just mentioning the setting or a random object, something to remind us that this is a real place. and i love stories that can do that an transport people to another world. *that sounds really.... marketed, like im trying to sell something. lol.*

And THANK YOU for liking the last line. I was having trouble trying to end it, and i wasn't sure if it was too abrupt or what. BUT THANK YOU SOOO MUCH.

you wanna get hitched, baby?

[initiatesix]

So, yeah, I really know nothing about these two artists other than the fact that they're both smokin' hot, so in my mind, this was an original piece.

Either way, this was amazing. Marion's character is win (I love smooth foreigners, don't ask me why), and I love how easily things flowed. It was just scene to scene to scene without unnecessary filler, and it was awesome.

[arkeis07]

actually, you've probably heard Jessie's song wanted on the radio or sumthing. I did, and i never realized. she's good. "WANTED" ON YOUTUBE

AND!! I NOTICED THAT IN HER VIDEO FOR WANTED, SHE LOOKS ALOT LIKE DALLAS FUCKING LOVATO IN A FEW SHOTS, SO THAT MADE THIS WHOLE FIC WRITING BUSINESS A LOT MORE FUN.

OMG I SHOULD DO DALLAS/ JESSIE. UGHHHHH PLOT BUNNY OH NOESSSS.

YEAH, I DONT KNOW MUCH ABOUT MARION, BUT I HAVE A FANTASY THAT ALL FOREIGN CHICKS ARE SMOOTH AND PICK UP AMERICAN WOMEN WITH EASE AND GRACE AND SEXINESS.

I just realized that caps were probably unnessceray for a majority of this comment. lolololol.

anyway, thanks for remarking on the flow. I was actually kinda afraid it might be too fast, but i'm hlad you saw it like that, it makes me feel great. XD

[ex_alittlel]

WOW. I DONT EVEN KNOW THIS SHIP, BUT THIS IS AWESOME.
I LOVE IT, BB. I REALLY DO.

1. I LOVE THIS WRITING STYLE.
2. IT WAS SO AMAZING. I LOVE YOUR TEXTURE/FEELING ETC DETAIL. I REALLY DO.
3. WILL YOU MARRY ME? AGAIN?

[arkeis07]

Thank you bb, that means a lot. :D Ad technically, they've never even met, so that was kinda fun, taking everything with such liberation. lol. I can make them whatever!

1. Thank you, im glad it turned out well.
2. And wow, i feel very ~blushy that you noticed it. I wasn't even trying hard for that aspect, but i guess it sort of just turned out that way. yay! fantastic!
3. BB i have been waiting for you to say that for the entirety of our marriage - a week. I want another honeymoon. Hawaii was fun, but lets go to Japan this time. :D

[micked18]

WTF HAVEN'T I COMMENTED YET????? DDD=
THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!!!!
i think i may have spelled a couple of those wrong...
I NOW HAVE HOTT IMAGES OF 2 OF MY FAVORITE SINGERS IN MY HEAD!!
I <3 U

seriously tho, I love your style of writing and how you were able to write this without much to really go on *huggle*

[arkeis07]

LOOOOOOL

YOU ARE VERY VERY WELCOME. I HAD FUN. IT WAS ENTERTAINING FOR ME TOO:D

Thank you, i really like it when ppl appreciate my writing style. *hugglesss*

and i love you for your photoshop skills, so i think we have a fair and balanced relationship :D

Sequel please?

[anonymous]

Hi I stumbled upon your blog when looking for info about Marion's new album (coming out later this year) and I instantly fell for your amazing writing style! I liked the way you kept things nicely descriptive that a 'movie' of your story actually plays in my brain, without digging too deep into the details.

Seeing you're still upkeeping this blog Any plans for a sequel to this? Moar Marion pls lol.

-B

Re: Sequel please?

[arkeis07]

Gah, Thank you so much for your comment!

But unfortunately, I really don't have any plans to continue. This was just a birthday present for a friend who had an obsession with both artists at the time.

Thanks very much again :)

Re: Sequel please?

[anonymous]

Aww too bad =( .Will read your latest entries though (are all the posts by you? Cause I see different "display pics" in the right side boxes though). Like your writing style a lot, everything is just so deep and [I don't know how to describe it but just awesome]

Cheers =)

Re: Sequel please?

[arkeis07]

Yea sorry buddy, this was really a one-time thing, I really don't know much about Marion otherwise lol. But I still really appreciate the praise.

And yup, this is all my journal, but I have about 33 different userpics right now, so I tend to switch em up whenever I fancy. I love livejournal haha.

Thank again for the comments!