The Bullet, CSI:Miami fanfiction

[ariietis]

I don't recall ever reading any post-Man Down fanfiction that describes the dynamics between Eric and Ryan. So I set about coming up with one (the last Thursday) when I should have been starting up on the internship report that I need to submit to school in the alarmingly near future. It doesn't help that Ryan's murmured words at the end of the

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[ariietis]

Thanks!

Eric/Ryan is just full of tension (of a certain kind that we like *laughs*) and uncertainties. Because those somehow made them even more endearing (to us).
Hah ^_^

[sunhawk]

I really like the little touch of Ryan rubbing his face, you worked that in so nicely :)

[ariietis]

Am glad you liked it!
I find it absolutely adorable when Ryan does that on-screen (all the time).
=)

[alligator138]

Love it! Definitely time to return to Eric's side!

I like the face-wiping thing too. It kind of provides a recurring theme, and I love it as much as Eric does. I also love that Ryan is so near to flattening the guy - something that's just not like him - because it's Eric that's hurt. *melts*

[ariietis]

Thanks!

Ryan likes to do the face-wiping thing. I find it cute after watching him do it so many times since he joined the team.

And because I watched the episodes online, when he almost took that guy out? I had to replayed that few seconds for a couple of times because it was so drool-worthy. Literally squealedgaspedOMGAWD-ed at it.
Ryan's definitely possessive. *Nods solemnly*

[lucky241]

Another wonderful story, I plan on working through all your eric/ryan stories. I like how you show Ryan feeling like he is part of a team but that he feels that connection with Eric (even if he doesn't know what it is, typical man, lol). You write these characters well and I truly feel like I am reading about them.

Bravo!!!

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[ariietis]

Thanks! But, uh, you're gonna be hugely disappointed because I only have all but 2 eric/ryan fics *sheepish grin*

It takes a while to write those two characters because, well, they're men, plus they have this really frustrating way of communicating with each other which is quite difficult to pen down. Had to spend 2-3 hours for the few hundred words of the first draft of each fic just to get their character right. Glad to know that I did it right! Thanks again =)

[lucky241]

then it will be worth the wait!! you are a really good writer, and that makes you very rare indeed!!

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[ariietis]

Oh wow. You're too kind.
*blushes*
*dances around silly*