fanfiction

[arienek]

Fandom: Bleach
Pariring: Gin/Kira
Rating: M
Warnings: my terrible English

just an experimental writing

THE MAP

If somebody was to chart a wind rose for the personality of Ichimaru Gin, it would have to become a multifarious guidepost, if based on said taichou’s appearances only. His ever-dazzling smile woud point at bright cheerfulness. His never-

Comments

[flo_nelja]

I adore it! The imagery is vivid and striking. The rhythm works very well, quite mesmerizing, obsessing.

[the_bad_joke]

Oh my goodness, that gave me goosebumps. O_O (Which is a good thing!) How you held some of the words longer than necessary, like "So ni-iii-iii-ce", really contributed to the semi-dark nature of it. So in other words, great job. ^_^
And don't worry, your English probably isn't as bad as you think.

[banshee_tao]

Oh Gawd, this is beautiful.
I loved every single bit and could quote every sentence as my favourite.