Aridia - The Early Years (Prologue)

Sep 24, 2003 19:32

PROLOGUE

Aridia stood leaning against the rail of her penthouse apartment looking at the city below. She flexed her wings slightly before settling them to her back once again. She sipped from her glass of white elven wine and a small delicate smile crossed her lips. If those in the city below knew of her existence, or even some of the things she ( Read more... )

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'Tis Tricia anonymous September 27 2003, 21:22:28 UTC
Heyla Chi, love the intro but.. watch your tenses. You flipped between present and past an awful lot. So, you might want to check that. Otherwise.. GREAT!!!

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