This was a surprise! Guess I should hope you get bored more often? *wink*
I loved how, even though they are in a relationship, their whole brother banter thing is still very there. The teasing, the name calling, Dean trying to rile Sam up (though with a purpose he does not have on the show! Hee). All felt very true to the characters.
Sam's aggravation at Dean, Dean knowing how to help Sam out, the way they knew each other so well. All great stuff.
I think my favorite bit was Sam teasing Dean about talking in his sleep and the opening to talking about fantasies from there. It was fun and it was hot and it was lovely, hon.
Like I said, big surprise but a good one (and a very sexy one!
Oh, good! *claps* I was hoping you'd like me posting this spur of the moment oneshot. Yep, boredom does have its perks sometimes. ;)
And whew! I'm so glad to hear you say that. I wasn't sure how it would read. If it would seem natural, fluid, them being in a relationship yet maintaining the things we love about them on the show with one another. I was worried about that.
Nice to know your favorite part was Sam teasing Dean about talking in his sleep. At that point I just kept writing 'cause I wasn't quite sure how to wrap it up.
I did! And boredom does, indeed, have it's perks. :-)
Oh yes, I thought the teasing and the banter worked really well. No matter how their relationship changes, adding love and/or sex to it for example, I just can't see Dean not teasing Sam. In fact, once they started a relationship I could see Dean using it as a bigger form of affection (or perhaps to cover his feelings?). It works, hon, at least to me.
Heh, Dean talking in his sleep just made me smile. And Sam giving him crap about it. Do I ever know about not knowing how to end a story so you just keep writing! *nods*
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I loved how, even though they are in a relationship, their whole brother banter thing is still very there. The teasing, the name calling, Dean trying to rile Sam up (though with a purpose he does not have on the show! Hee). All felt very true to the characters.
Sam's aggravation at Dean, Dean knowing how to help Sam out, the way they knew each other so well. All great stuff.
I think my favorite bit was Sam teasing Dean about talking in his sleep and the opening to talking about fantasies from there. It was fun and it was hot and it was lovely, hon.
Like I said, big surprise but a good one (and a very sexy one!
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And whew! I'm so glad to hear you say that. I wasn't sure how it would read. If it would seem natural, fluid, them being in a relationship yet maintaining the things we love about them on the show with one another. I was worried about that.
Nice to know your favorite part was Sam teasing Dean about talking in his sleep. At that point I just kept writing 'cause I wasn't quite sure how to wrap it up.
I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! :)
*Hugs*
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Oh yes, I thought the teasing and the banter worked really well. No matter how their relationship changes, adding love and/or sex to it for example, I just can't see Dean not teasing Sam. In fact, once they started a relationship I could see Dean using it as a bigger form of affection (or perhaps to cover his feelings?). It works, hon, at least to me.
Heh, Dean talking in his sleep just made me smile. And Sam giving him crap about it. Do I ever know about not knowing how to end a story so you just keep writing! *nods*
*Hugs*
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