Yay, it's up! After that little taste from before, getting to read the whole thing was very satisfying.
I loved how Larkle kept using the closet (will Raya also take advantage, I wonder?). Everyone trying to protect Riley felt very IC, as she worked through her own feelings. I also enjoyed how you brought about Riley's realization of her feelings for Maya. Felt very 'organic' and very her.
Maya not making a move and wanting Riley to be happy, even if it wasn't with her was very, very Maya. So IC I could hear words of dialogue in Sabrina's voice. Well done!
Hints of Cory/Shawn! :-)
And the ending made me smile. In more ways than one.
Yes, it is, sweetie! :) I'm glad you enjoyed it! And let me tell ya, I worked my tail off this weekend to get it finished in time (although, it was fairly easy because I knew where the characters were going and the distraction was a godsend--as I'm sure you know by now).
I'm glad to hear you thought I kept them in character through them wanting to protect Riley. And that you enjoyed how I wrote Riley's coming to terms with her feelings for Maya. I felt like I was channeling both Cory and Topanga during that scene. I wanted her to have a little bit of a freak-out moment but having her reasoning kick in too.
And aww! I'm also glad you thought this version of Maya was in character as well. <3
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Yay for getting it done so quickly but you could have taken your time, hon. No pressure, as always. I mean, I'm thrilled it was up so quickly and available after my weekend with the kids but if it had taken longer that would have been okay too. But I'm glad it was helped distract you.
Yeah, after the Pluto episode I could very much see the rest of the 'gang' protecting Riley like this.
Always happy to get a Cory/Shawn mention! And I guess the kids wanted the spotlight to themselves? LOL
I'll check it out on the board later, give it a reread.
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I loved how Larkle kept using the closet (will Raya also take advantage, I wonder?). Everyone trying to protect Riley felt very IC, as she worked through her own feelings. I also enjoyed how you brought about Riley's realization of her feelings for Maya. Felt very 'organic' and very her.
Maya not making a move and wanting Riley to be happy, even if it wasn't with her was very, very Maya. So IC I could hear words of dialogue in Sabrina's voice. Well done!
Hints of Cory/Shawn! :-)
And the ending made me smile. In more ways than one.
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I'm glad to hear you thought I kept them in character through them wanting to protect Riley. And that you enjoyed how I wrote Riley's coming to terms with her feelings for Maya. I felt like I was channeling both Cory and Topanga during that scene. I wanted her to have a little bit of a freak-out moment but having her reasoning kick in too.
And aww! I'm also glad you thought this version of Maya was in character as well. <3 ( ... )
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Yeah, after the Pluto episode I could very much see the rest of the 'gang' protecting Riley like this.
Always happy to get a Cory/Shawn mention! And I guess the kids wanted the spotlight to themselves? LOL
I'll check it out on the board later, give it a reread.
*HUGS*
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