The Fake Boyfriend Prologue

[ariafree]

STORY TITLE: The Fake Boyfriend

AUTHOR: ariafree

RATING: PG-13 (R in later chapters)

WARNING/DISCLAIMER: I don't own these characters. I also don't own Boy Meets World. This show belongs to creators Michael Jacobs & April Kelly. No disrespect is meant. HET & SLASH.

PAIRINGS/CHARACTERS: Cory/Shawn; Jack/Eric; Topanga; Angela

SUMMARY: With Topanga at Yale

Comments

[holly_blackmoor]

You put up the prologue, cool!

And what a great start it was. Love Angela already (can see she's going to be a big help to the boys), and poor Shawnie's feelings are palpable.

This line:
[i]He may love Topanga, but you’re the one he can’t live without.[/i] (Edited to add: darnit, I thought putting the 'i's' by the quote would mean it would get the italics.)
is probably the best description of their relationship I've ever read.

And then Cory pops 'the question' and the drunken declarations of love. So cute!

A wonderful start, hon. Can't wait for more!

*HUGS*

[ariafree]

I'm glad you're enjoying this already. Since it's my first multi-chapter BMW fic I was pretty nervous about posting

[holly_blackmoor]

I got that vibe from Angela on the show as well and it comes across very nicely here too.

I really like that line. It's a great summation of their relationship, IMO.

And I agree that it would take Cory being drunk for him to propose the plan. And Shawn is drowning in the angst, isn't he?

Can't wait to read more, you've only wetted my appetite!

Edited: because I can't spell, apparently.