Take it from the Inside (H50 fic, Steve/Danny, NC-17)

Dec 13, 2010 13:27

Title: Take it from the Inside ( Read more... )

nc-17, fic, h50, fanfic

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ariadnes_string December 16 2010, 01:06:35 UTC
lol--that image does a little something for me, too--that's why I put it in ;)

After 1.09, Steve + knives is practically canon--took me a little bit to get Danny there too, but he got there in the end--

Thanks for reading--I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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tolerik December 14 2010, 17:11:18 UTC
I tend to get twitchy around sharp objects... it's not so much the blood the squicks me... although I wouldn't say it was my kink either, but this was so perfectly in character and wonderfully written. I loved every aspect of it.

This one's going to be saved on my hard drive ;)

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ariadnes_string December 16 2010, 01:15:34 UTC
Thanks for the lovely feedback--I'm so glad to hear that it all felt in character. I'm really glad you enjoyed it, especially if this kind of thing isn't your usual cup of tea--thanks for reading and commenting!

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disturbinglynic December 14 2010, 19:28:50 UTC
Fandoms need more knife and blood play. Thank you for this. You have made my day ♥

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ariadnes_string December 16 2010, 01:16:32 UTC
You're very welcome--glad to help out with the supply ;) I'm really glad you enjoyed it--thanks for reading and commenting!

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elise_509 December 14 2010, 19:33:33 UTC
I can totally buy Steve being into knife play but Danny's a bit harder to get there; you did a wonderful job in this fic of getting him to the point where I could see it happening. It was incredibly hot but also full of great character stuff about Steve that I loved. Hot and awesome!

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ariadnes_string December 16 2010, 01:19:37 UTC
Yeah--you put your finger on why it took me a long time to write. I could see it happening, but it took me a while to figure out how/why Danny would get there. I'm relieved to hear it worked--and also that some character stuff came through--I was really hoping for that.

Thanks for reading--I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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mickey_sixx December 14 2010, 19:43:50 UTC
So, I've never really ventured into bloodplay before, but this? Holy crap, this was hot. The whole... intimacy of the act was gorgeous. Beautiful <3

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ariadnes_string December 16 2010, 01:27:36 UTC
Thanks for the lovely feedback--it may be that the intimacy of the thing is the real kink for me, and everything else is secondary. I'm very glad it worked for you--thanks for reading and commenting!

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