Fic for watsons woes prompt 10 : "His Bach "

Jul 11, 2013 03:39

Title: "His Bach"
Author: ariadnechan
Rating: PG.
Fandom: Sherlock BBC
Characters: Sherlock and John, Sherlock/John
Summary: “John with time looked out for the piece in Internet and he named it Sherlock's Bach.”
Warnings: None Now betaed!!
Word Count: 500 approx
Author's Notes: Written for the watsons_woes July Writing Prompt #10: Musical prompt: Chaconne for ( Read more... )

sherlock, watsons_woes july challenge, fic, sherlockbbc, john watson, johnlock, pg

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thesmallhobbit July 11 2013, 12:43:12 UTC
I really like the idea behind this - the idea of Sherlock's Bach conveying so many messages.

I would be happy to beta for you at some point, but the timescale for these challenges is too tight. (By the time you have written something I will have gone to bed and so won't be able to get it back to you in time.) If you want to contact me, feel free to DM me on LJ.

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ariadnechan July 11 2013, 20:44:02 UTC
Thanks a lot!

do you think this is too terrible grammar wise, i only wanted a quick look so i can be understood, with the right times and words. After July I think i will ask for someone to beta me with time so i can improve them, for now it is only a quicky.

but if you want to help me at the end of July that would be amazing too

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thesmallhobbit July 11 2013, 20:52:48 UTC
I don't think it is too terrrible. There are a number of errors, but it doesn't stop your fic from being understandable. What there is really only says "this writer is not writing in their first language".

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ariadnechan July 12 2013, 01:10:18 UTC
Thanks for your input!!

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fanbot July 11 2013, 14:14:35 UTC
Sweet!

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ariadnechan July 11 2013, 20:44:37 UTC
Thanks :D

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