The fight between Feyd Rautha and Paul. And Stonn 'The Harkonnen Beast', drinking T'Grell 's blood. And the Litany of Fear -oh sacred words! The arrogancy of Feyd, in front of Paul...or Stonn, in front of Spock.The ahn woon and the dagger...or is a ckriss? And the BG training, saving Jim...and converting him in a poor copy of Jessica, loving his master, tsk...
es el pon farr stonn estaba en ponfarr, pero rechazaba a t'grell como su mate, pero el era suyo para matarlo si queria.
Spock intervino así que stonn tenia que matarlo, y si no vengarse con jim
Spock al ver jim en peligro termino de asumir que jim era su mate y fue llevado al pon farr por el challenge de stonn ambos estan en pon farr y para spock estan peleando por la posesion de jim no por duna
Pero jim si se enamoro de spock a lo jessica.
a todo esto posteare haste el 6 pero estoy terminando de revisarlo de ahí pa alla sera la otra semana
y como te digo lo unico que copie de duna fue a Jim como un breeder benegesserit con todo el entrenamiento que eso requiere y con el talento especial de la voz y la empatia natural de jim entrenada por betazoid, pero el pobre fue despojado de gran parte de su memoria para este trabajo, podra volver a ser el algun dia? ahh necesito hablar contigo necesito ayuda pal final.
I never ever told that. But the fight came to my memory. Scene is too similar of Lynch's film and is obvious; they are not fighting for Arrakis, but for Jim. And yes, Jim feels for Spock by himself but...what will happen when this feeling attacks his BG training? And when he recovers the memory? There's a way; the mind-meld, ari. The seek in the memories of Jim, since born, before Betazoid training, before BG imprint...
my betas quit for xmas so i have their first draft for chapter 6 and from one of chapter 7, so if you had time to do my recheck of chapter 6 i will post it tomorrow, i was thinking on post it anyway as i could, but the others i think i'm stuck until xmas said bye bye. and i need to do the epilogue.
Did I forget to tell you how much I liked it in my emails? Sorry! I really do love it. =)
And I wish I could beta, but I'm not free to after xmas either. I just popped on to check my flist before bed, and I'm going to be cooking/working/cleaning/celebrating till Monday. =P
If you still need a beta come Monday though, lemme know!
everybody is in that me i have therapy with my children all day today and tomorrow i must cleaning, /cooking and celebrating, and going to my mother in law the 25 also buy my son his present because he changes his mind last minute from mascot to surprise
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The arrogancy of Feyd, in front of Paul...or Stonn, in front of Spock.The ahn woon and the dagger...or is a ckriss? And the BG training, saving Jim...and converting him in a poor copy of Jessica, loving his master, tsk...
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ni siquiera pense en eso!!!
es el pon farr stonn estaba en ponfarr, pero rechazaba a t'grell como su mate, pero el era suyo para matarlo si queria.
Spock intervino así que stonn tenia que matarlo, y si no vengarse con jim
Spock al ver jim en peligro termino de asumir que jim era su mate y fue llevado al pon farr por el challenge de stonn ambos estan en pon farr y para spock estan peleando por la posesion de jim no por duna
Pero jim si se enamoro de spock a lo jessica.
a todo esto posteare haste el 6 pero estoy terminando de revisarlo de ahí pa alla sera la otra semana
y como te digo lo unico que copie de duna fue a Jim como un breeder benegesserit con todo el entrenamiento que eso requiere y con el talento especial de la voz y la empatia natural de jim entrenada por betazoid, pero el pobre fue despojado de gran parte de su memoria para este trabajo, podra volver a ser el algun dia? ahh necesito hablar contigo necesito ayuda pal final.
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Also, the last two lines on this page are gorgeous! =)
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I'm so happy!!!!
my betas quit for xmas so i have their first draft for chapter 6 and from one of chapter 7, so if you had time to do my recheck of chapter 6 i will post it tomorrow, i was thinking on post it anyway as i could, but the others i think i'm stuck until xmas said bye bye.
and i need to do the epilogue.
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And I wish I could beta, but I'm not free to after xmas either. I just popped on to check my flist before bed, and I'm going to be cooking/working/cleaning/celebrating till Monday. =P
If you still need a beta come Monday though, lemme know!
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me i have therapy with my children all day today and tomorrow i must cleaning, /cooking and celebrating, and going to my mother in law the 25 also buy my son his present because he changes his mind last minute from mascot to surprise
happy holidays!!
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