Rubber Duckies

[ardvari]

Title: Rubber Duckies
Author: ardvariPairing: Original (f/f

Comments

[ardvari]

Thank YOU for the feedback. I really appreciate it! :D

[prim8]

Adorable!
Moar plz :)

[ardvari]

I do hope there'll be more. I'll let these two play as much as they want.

Thanks for the comment!

[geekgrrllurking]

AAWWW!!! So cute! Glad to see Lindsay had all her ducks in a row before she asked Jamie to move in ;)

And oof is totally a word. The jury is still out on defenestrates though...

[shatterpath]

*headesk*

I don't even know WHY the pun startled me... Really I don't.

But I confess I'm a bit bummed I didn't see it too....

[ardvari]

LOL! Well, it's actually defenestrate that's really a word. Oof is not, technically. :p Denefestrate can be found in the OED though.

Merci for the comment!

[zamboni12]

Oh, how lovely. I like the intimacy of it. It´s such a delicate moment in a relationship and you perfectly delineate it. Bravo!
Good work!

And thank you for still posting on multi_fictiion. I decided to keep it up although em_ethereality left LJ for good. I think it´s a good community, your entries are the best proof, which is worth to live on.

Hugs, Heike

[ardvari]

Oh, thank YOU! Not only for reading, but also for maintaining multi_fiction. It's a great comm and I'd love for it to continue to exist. We'll have to promote it a bit so other people use it as well. :)

[shatterpath]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

What a marvelous little snapshot in time. I like how this flows, despite the characters being strangers to the reader. It's very visceral and organic.

[ardvari]

Well, I guess the thing with the characters being strangers is normal for original fiction. It's fanfic that "spoils" us by giving us the preset characters to play with/change around.

Thanks for the comment, my dear!