Ficlet: Disintegration (SPN, Dean-centric), R

[archon_mentha]

Title: Disintegration
Fandom/Pairing: Dean-centric gen(ish), various implied noncon
Rating/Warnings: Hard R. Torture. Very dark content.
Summary: After thirty years of torture in Hell, Dean stands up.
Note: Written for the lovely fleshflutter for More Joy Day with love.

Comments

[fleshflutter]

Oh sweetheart! I have such LOVE. This is totally brilliant and I'm almost grateful that I haven't been able to drag you into SPN fandom with me because your vision is just so fresh and you pick up on things that strike so hard! I absolutely love your Dean voice, and I love how you've played his relationship with Alastair, that they're friends. I love this line - One day, if you're good - and you, my friend, will be very, very good - you'll see it for what it really is.

And the way you've handled Dean/Bela is absolutely wonderful. It's cruel and it's brutal but it's every bit what Hell should be. That is a killer last line. ♥ ♥ ♥

[archon_mentha]

I'm so glad you liked it! I wasn't sure if or how often this has been fanficced before, but I purposely did not set out looking for it. And my Dean voice definitely owes quite a bit to yours! ♥

Thank you, hon - and I hope you have the best day. You certainly deserve it!

Oops! Along with a bad spelling error. Thank you! *whistles and fixes it* ♥

[logovo]

Whoa, this was a perfect, horrible, damn seductive moment.

[archon_mentha]

Thank you! I'm glad it worked for you. :)

[such_heights]

Oh, fuck. This is terrible and brilliantly done and far too convincing. And god, as the lady said, KILLER last line.

[archon_mentha]

:D Thank you! It's just such a horrible thought, for both of them - but in a way, Bela never really had much of a chance.

[linnet_melody]

Wow. Just... just wow. Flesh pointed me over here and I came and I saw and I whimpered. I can sense Dean's emotions, swimming round and round like in a goldfish bowl, unable to attach to anything. And then he feels so -free.- And this whole thing underlining that freedom, after all, is relative.

You? You're awesome.

[archon_mentha]

:D Thank you! I'm very glad it worked for you so well! (And any awesome I have is probably contact-awesome from fleshflutter. *g*) ♥

[yamapea]

You have such a way with words. ♥ I'm so happy to see you writing spn fic!

[archon_mentha]

*Hugs* Thank you! It was a lot of (I'm not sure if fun's the right word) - it was enjoyable to write. :)