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[Gundam 00] The Subtle Grace of Gravity (Arc 5)

Jan 17, 2010 21:22

Title: The Subtle Grace of Gravity
   → Arc 1: Waking
   → Arc 2: Return
   → Arc 3: Learning
   → Arc 4: Surprise
   → Arc 5: Intimacy
Fandom: Gundam 00
Characters/Pairing: Lockon (Neil)/Tieria. Regene cameo.
Rating: NC-17.
Wordcount: 6,516 (fifth part)
Notes: Part five of nine, and one of the longest. Posting should be more regular from now on.
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long fic is long, lockon/tieria, gundam 00, lockon, what the internet is for, alternate timeline, tieria

Comments 9

kanilla_maxwell January 18 2010, 10:54:15 UTC

Ahh, Tieria, you're so lovely! It was so much fun to watch him try to figure the whole sex-business out. The way he talks gives me the kicks and giggles, it's so endearing. And of course, the sex was yummy :)
I feel a it sorry for Tieria though, leaving his body at such a moment.
And for Lockon, since his partner doesn't have a clue about the importance of foreplay/dating/romance and such, XD.

Wonderful chapter! :3

annwyd January 19 2010, 17:19:24 UTC

Thank you!

I think Lockon prefers it with a clueless partner, really. ;)

karinablue_rose January 18 2010, 15:54:54 UTC

Really awesome chapter and the sex between Lockon and Tieria was well worth the wait.

annwyd January 19 2010, 17:19:38 UTC

I'm glad I delivered. :)

keleosnoonna January 18 2010, 22:50:21 UTC

TIEEEERIAAAAA!!! He's so precious!!
I really loved this, beautifully written!

annwyd January 19 2010, 17:19:48 UTC

Thank you!

rubyofkukundu January 19 2010, 08:35:22 UTC

I am always overjoyed when I find that there's more of this to read :D

Tieria's way of initiating sex is hilarious:

"Lockon Stratos," he said, "remove your pants." - I laughed so so hard.

He held up a packet and looked at Lockon with a very serious face. "I have acquired lubricant." - Ditto

Once again, I have to go on about Lockon's characterisation and how it's so interesting to read. I had foolishly thought that entering a relationship with Tieria would force Lockon to open up a little more, but of course it hasn't. They might be lovers now, but Lockon's still just going through the motions. I love it.

I also like the whole part about the gloves, and how, in a way, they act as a metaphor. For Lockon to take off the gloves, it's almost like he'd be removing 'Lockon Stratos' and exposing the 'Neil Dylandy' underneath. And it seems like Lockon's no way near ready to do that yet.

<3 <3 <3 <3

MOAR PLEASE :D

annwyd January 19 2010, 17:32:54 UTC

I confess: "Lockon Stratos, remove your pants" was one of the lines I'd been waiting to write almost since starting the fic. :D

I'm glad you like Lockon's characterization, since in the end this is more his story than Tieria's. Right now he's still in denial about his ability to change and open up to people, but there's still a lot of the fic to go. :)

maynairas January 27 2010, 05:07:02 UTC

I love this story so far. Very well written and quite in character. Also very much in a plausible setting and situation. Nicely done. I like how you explain Neil surviving without just him randomly coming back from the dead as well. Also Tieria's bluntness is great.
Anyways, just thought I'd leave a comment, since you deserve it! =)
Hope you keep writing, looking forward to more!!