[Gundam 00] The Subtle Grace of Gravity (Arc 4)

[annwyd]

Title: The Subtle Grace of Gravity
   → Arc 1: Waking
   → Arc 2: Return
   → Arc 3: Learning
   → Arc 4: Surprise
Fandom: Gundam 00
Characters/Pairing: Primarily Lockon (Neil)/Tieria. Kati/Patrick cameo.
Rating: PG-13 for now, eventual NC-17.
Wordcount: 4,093 (fourth part)
Notes: Part four of nine. Sorry for the delay!
Summary: Danger visits the

Comments

[meyham_m2]

Awesome chapter is awesome.

I still can't get over how you can just throw these technological terms around and make them work. If I didn't know better, I'd assume you were writing about real, current technology. Skillz, girl, skillz. Also, lovin' the LockTie♥

[annwyd]

Thank you. I'm glad the technological stuff works, since I'm really just winging it in that regard. XD

[elenatha]

I've waited so long for you to post * 3 * <3
It's so nice, coming back from japan and finding this updated. ILU.
That kiss was so cute and... awkward xD Poor Tieria, Lockon is more blind than I thought.

[annwyd]

Lockon is just...selectively blind, that's all! Thoroughly so, though. ;) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[furato]

Yay for Kati & Patrick!

I love the part where Tieria (or anyone, really, he needs it) talk back to Lockon and tell him NO, STUPID, YOU'RE PRECIOUS. Also the part where Lockon is a blockhead and responded to Tieria's kiss with the intent of teaching him the right way to do it. You're really good at making lines that are sweet and funny and the same time without obviously joking.

[annwyd]

Thank you!

It's going to take Lockon pretty much the rest of the fic for that talk to sink in, but hey. That's why there's still so much left even though they've kissed now.

[kanilla_maxwell]

I missed the previous chapter when you posted it, so I got a double dosage of goodness this time around :)

And good it was! Like one of the others who commented said, the way you use technical terms is so natural that one could think you're an engineer, or something.

BUT - the most important thing first, before my battery runs out- thank you for the KISS! Damnit, that made my guts go all butterfly on me. And if a mere kiss did that, I wonder how I'll survive when we come to the NC-17 parts of the story -sigh-

Tieria has become so human, and yet he retains his less human sides. When he grabbed Lockon's wrist I was so happy! I love how they tip toe around one another. And not to mention Tieria's obliviousness toward his own feelings - when you smell someone's bed, there is definitely something going on :)

Looking forward to the next chapter!

[annwyd]

I just hang out around programmers sometimes. ;)

Glad you enjoyed!

[annwyd]

Glad you liked it. :D