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[Dragon Age] Shining Armor

Sep 21, 2011 23:35

Title: Shining Armor
Fandom: Dragon Age
Pairing: Elissa Cousland/Nathaniel Howe
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 1,749
Notes: Spoilers for the entire first game and Awakening.
Summary: Nathaniel Howe came to find his father's killer, but the woman he discovers is something rather more complex than just that.

( Nathaniel always expected that when he finally met the Hero of Ferelden, his thoughts would narrow to a single focused pinpoint of vengeance. )

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Comments 2

mariantarielle October 2 2011, 07:59:38 UTC

I really liked this. Very nicely written. :-)

ainulindale October 21 2011, 21:12:38 UTC

I love how this flows. The use of the present tense give it an almost surreal feel with so much focus on dialogue. And I particularly enjoy how vague you've made the Warden. She says so very little but just enough that we're able to piece together all the things that Nathaniel can't.

Beautiful work!