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[Gurren Lagann] The Moon Is Made of Honey

Feb 23, 2010 11:52

Title: The Moon Is Made of Honey
Fandom: Gurren Lagann
Pairing: Simon/Nia
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: 5,478
Notes: Written to take place in series canon, but informed by a mix of series canon, novel canon, movie canon, and my own headcanon.
Summary: In the week after the final battle, Simon and Nia have a little time to spend with each other. This is ( Read more... )

gurren lagann, what the internet is for, nia, simon/nia

Comments 9

bipolarcucco February 23 2010, 20:06:11 UTC

"Look! There is a part of you that is rising like a flower which lifts its head to meet the sun. I will kiss it, and it will rise faster."
You have no idea how much that made me giggle.

Ahhh I love this story! It's one that I'll definitely have to read again sometime.
The fact that you were able to emulate Simon and Nia so well is amazing. Especially Nia, she had just the right amount of maturity to her and yet she was still a bubbly, confused woman. The title had me wondering at first but once I knew what it was about, it's just so like Nia to say such things! And Simon is just such a sweet, loveable dork here.

annwyd February 24 2010, 20:33:25 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad the characters came across well.

blackbluesock February 24 2010, 00:05:43 UTC

Absolutely beautiful.

annwyd February 24 2010, 20:33:36 UTC

Thank you.

yumi_kanzaki February 24 2010, 03:34:38 UTC

This was so romantic and sweet, I couldn't stop "awww-ing" throughout the entire thing. The way you characterized both Simon and Nia was fantastic.

Nia's comment about Simon's erection made me burst out, that seems like something that would be so like her to say. I also thought it was adorable how the animals all scattered away from their home for them.

The way you wrote out the second love scene and the scene after the wedding was absolutely beautiful, I couldn't help but shed a few tears.

I absolutely loved this fan fiction, it really cheered me up. This is the type of story I can come back and read over and over and I'll enjoy it every time. Keep up the great work! (:

annwyd February 24 2010, 20:34:03 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. :)

red_savant February 28 2010, 01:06:59 UTC

You just have such an amazing style, both when Nia's speaking and in description. It's like poetry, almost, and a joy to read. =)

Looking forward to seeing more!

ext_1876249 May 28 2013, 04:17:34 UTC

This is REALLY damn good; an inspiration for people who are thinking about writing fanfic, like moi. I wish you'd put it on FF net; if you did that to begin with, I would've found this a LOT sooner! :(