[APH fanfiction] Ribbons

[archangelunmei]

Title: Ribbons
Fandom: Axis Powers Hetalia
Pairings: Poland-centric, kinda one-sided LietPol, one-sided LietBela
Rating: M
Warnings: Angst, violence
Summary: Poland stole one of her dresses once, when they were all the USSR. Russia beat him for it when he found out, but Poland didn't care. He thought maybe if he dressed like her, Liet would finally

Comments

[shineofastar]

Oh God, I can't believe this fic made me cry for real ;_;...

LietPol is one of my OTPs, but it's the only one where I can't see the other without their partner, though I know LietBela is very canon historically speaking... ANYWAY, this was beautiful. I felt all the feelings Feliks felt like my own and yeah, I understand his desperation and all... And his strenght. He is the Fenix after all, he will rise always and keep trying. Stoping isn't in his dictionary.

I love you so much for this beautiful fic the night before I start uni ;A; you did the best of the jobs, seriously! <3

[mase992]

Oh my gosh... I really feel like crying now ;A;.

Bittersweet but oh so true. I'm officially adjusting my head-canon and make Pol crossdress for that sole reason, damn it!

Ahem... such a heart-wrenching piece. Unique in its one-sidedness and apparent hopelessness. Despite that, however, you managed to keep Poland attitute true to his defiant spirit and it serves to give him and the reader hope in the end.

I liked that as I read there was an actual feel of the effect of passing time and the pains of waiting. That is something that takes work, especially in a Hetalia story and even more in a story of this length but you worked that out neatly and carefully without losing the "thread" on the characters.

Now, I'd love to read one with Lithuania's POV, haha >3<.

Damn the LietBela canon for the moment ;3;

Have I said I love this enough??

<3 <3

[lalachoy]

But besides the pony and his desire for his people to always be free, he's only wanted one thing.

Lithuania.

I cried right there. ;O; I knew where this was going to go and...asdfghjkl; WHYYY.

You got everything straight on. Everything. Ughhhh. Ughhhh. ;O; Though my reason for his crossdressing is different, I've always liked this reason too because it makes sense. But still. My OTP weeps tonight because...this fic is so true. :'(

[didgeridoodle]

This was heartwrenchingly beautiful. It can be a VERY plausible explanation for Poland's crossdressing mannerisms.

And the prose! It just plays itself in my head, I don't even know where to begin! The emotion was very solid, in my opinion. Good job! This definitely heads into my memories, if you don't mind. I have a penchant for angsty fics, ahaha.

[simplistic_star]

Honestly...I don't know what compelled me to even click on the link in the first place. One, I'm a LietBela fan and two, when the rating is M I become wary. But since the warnings were only angst and violence, I thought I'll try reading it