[Tsubasa fanfiction] Midnight is for Comfort

Feb 28, 2009 00:44

Title: Midnight is for Comfort
Prompt: February 28, 2009 ~ We touch, we hold, we keep one another free
Fandom: Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle
Characters/Pairing: KuroFai
Timeline: Post-series
SPOILERS: Up to chapter 214
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Sometimes the past is too much.
Posted to 31_days, clampfiction, kuroganefai and kuroxfai
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tunazap February 28 2009, 07:11:48 UTC
Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

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ellethill February 28 2009, 07:25:29 UTC
Oh, I like this <333

The part of me that has to keep being reminded that Clamp the characters themselves have stated that crying is actually a strength was just a tiny bit worried about the idea that they're having brain-wracking sob-inducing nightmares, but let's be reasonable, if they wouldn't have any at all (particularly after everything was over and they could actually allow their psyche to relax) they wouldn't be human, right? Right.

That said, I really liked the way you handled this (because the mood and the tone are lovely throughout the fic), the ending and the same reason to mourn and their related thoughts in particular. And the fangirl in me can't help smiling like an idiot at the second-to-last bout of bad dreams (you know, I can picture it in my head, and it is lovely <333)

Kurogane humming lullabies made me blink a bit, but hey, it's the middle of the night and the man is actually incredibly sweet thoughtful, so who says it couldn't happen? *shrug* ^^

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archangelunmei February 28 2009, 16:50:31 UTC
Ehehehe, Kurogane humming lullabyes was a but of a Freudian slip on my part. I have a long running role-play going with a friend of mine where we've established that Kuro-mama used to hum lullabyes to little Kurogane, and now he hums them to Fai. XD;; It was late when I wrote that, it just kinda slipped in and I forgot it wasn't canon. But I do still think it's in Kuro's character, because you're right, he can be very adorable considerate like that.

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micah_piper February 28 2009, 08:49:06 UTC
Oh, this is very lovely. I usually don't like reading drabbles, but this one was worth sticking around for. Great job.

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anyjen February 28 2009, 09:26:38 UTC
Owww, that was painful and beautiful.

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katjes_es_es_es February 28 2009, 11:44:02 UTC
Ohhh, so beautiful....
*wants further adaptation of the manga*

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