Chronicles of Narnia fic: homecoming. PG. character death.

[archanas247]

homecoming

this place is cold and sterile, smelling of death and detergent. your chest hurts and your heart hurts but you know it is coming, soon, and the thought is like a ray of sunshine

“And Mrs Hastings in room 12 is just a bit, well, cuckoo, you know? She was diagnosed seven years ago, Alzheimer’s, and she’s gotten steadily worse. She

Comments

[jemmir]

Oh, Susan's way of returning to Narnia. How heartbreaking.

[flyinfaeries83]

Wow what a powerful piece of writing. I loved everything about it.

flyinfaeries83

[rainylondonight]

Wow, I loved this even though I'm not that big of a Narnia fan. Great job.

[archanas247]

^_^ thanks hon.

[ronniekins77]

Oh, that was so beautiful! It feels so good to read Narnia fic again, especially fic that handles Susan's return. This was so heartbreaking and happy at the same time. I generally tend to not like stories with the italics throughout, but I thought you did it very well here. The line, Welcome to my land, Queen Susan was so beautiful. :)

[anna_elena]

I really, really loved reading this. The way the lines in italics were written continued to get both more heartbreaking and more uplifting all at once.
Keep up the lovely work!