(FIC) Jaevel Av En Tango: (Ch. 6) Nightmares

[arch_schatten]

I am working on this story, slowly but steadily! I am.. slow, that's all I can say. I'm a bit behind but I'm trying to catch up tonight! But.. here's today's post!

Series: Jaevel Av En Tango (A Devil of a Tango)
Title: Chapter 6 - Nightmares
Rating: PG-15 (for violent imagery)
Characters/Pairings: Bruce, Clark, Thomas Jr, Thomas Sr, Barbara Gordon

Comments

[genclay]

I'm still enjoying this... and it's still confusing me :P

Though this time i think it's cos I haven't read the rest for a while. Time for a reread I think.

[arch_schatten]

I'm sorry it took me so long to get back to it! it's.. a confusing world, but I hope it's making a bit more sense now than before :P Thank you for reading!

[starsandsea]

*squees and bounces*

Upadate!!!!! Yay!!!!! :D

Is it wrong that I just want to pet Bruce here? The flashback of him loosing his eye... *shivers*

Eeee, the dogs are okay!!! Or at least okayish. *sighs in relief* I was really worried about them. And about Harvey and Selina and Bruce and Clark, of course. :p

*giggles at the last line* I have mentioned how much I love this fic, haven't I? *bounces* I hope there's more soon! :D *glomps you*

[arch_schatten]

Hee! I'm sorry it took me so long! I'm going to try to keep regular-ish updating at least through November, see if I burn out or not with the daily posting, lol. I hope not! I really need to sit down and write more, instead of procrastinating :P

The scene where Bruce's looses his eye was one of the ones I really wanted to write from the start, so I'm glad it got to you. Bruce is very petable in here! he's dangerous, but... he also needs a friend.

Geri and Freki! I could never hurt them badly! I love them too much. I'm glad you're enjoying this, Star! thank you for reading! *glomps back*

[jij]

I'm so happy to see that flashback posted! It works really well, shooting at reflections and all the complications of it.

"Thank you. They are..." he paused, thinking of all that could have been lost if they had died.

"Your friends?"

"Important," Vak corrected him.

Yes, well...you say "important," I say "precious to me," about the same thing. ;)

[arch_schatten]

I should be sending you the next chapter this weekend, if you're free to beta it! I'm hoping to finish the next chapter tonight. By the way, I will have my lappy this weekend! I hope I can see you some days! D ended up not needing mine :)

I really liked writing the flashback, I think it was one of my favorite scenes from the start, so I wanted to get to it... and you know Bruce, no matter what version of him, he cares. He cares a lot. But he has his ways, his secret ways. Mroowww.

[jij]

I should be sending you the next chapter this weekend, if you're free to beta it!

I am around! :) Though I won't be able to make BTAS tomorrow probably...more visa fun, woe. I have to email about that! :/

[r3nlock]

this is awesome...i love how bruce is with tommy, i don't get to read many plots where tommy actually feels love for his lost brother-most people forget that part of their relationship. its funny, while reading this i was imagining batman and superman showing up so that there would be 3 versions in one story and i was having a blast imagining all of their reactions to this predicament.