(FIC) Somewhere to hang the secret identity, Day 2

[arch_schatten]

Lalalaaa, I am doing my best to catch up AND write! Maybe, just maybe, I can write this daily...? I definitely enjoy it quite a lot! *hums happily*

Fandom: DCU
Series: Somewhere to hang the secret identity
Pairing: Bruce Wayne/Clark Kent
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Bruce and Clark start e-mailing, e-flirting, and eventually, e-dating. Too bad they can'

Comments

[arch_schatten]

I'm going for a daily schedule, who knows how long will I resists the slaving rhythm :P

I'm very glad you like the flirting boys. And Clark has issues with mind control, I think it's important to address them. Thursdays he has Starrios for breakfast!

[damos]

Teehee!

Wonderful continuation, Mina.

I am loving the tone and flow of these email conversations. I love the reverence for Alan and the little bits thrown in here and there about the JLI and the current JLA.

And, of course, I love the last two emails. Babs being calm and in control and Clark thinking that Bruce will call, but knowing that Bruce's definition of things getting out of hand can... well can be a bit out of hand. "Look Clark, I called as soon as I heard that second rib crack. I was doing fine with the one cracked rib, but, like any sensible person, when the second one went 'snap' I knew it was time to call in Superman."

[arch_schatten]

Thank you Dan!

I'm glad the flow is working, I think it ends up a bit abruptly every night, but.. I never know where to stop them! I think both of them would be fanboys of Alan, he's the first real Superhero they probably got to see... Alan is like the Grandfather of Superheroing, he just feels like that to me.

LOL, Bruce's definition of out of hand! 'Okay, if the blood loss gets to bad and I start slipping into shock, I'll call Superman. But for now I'm peachy.' He's rather stubborn, that one.

[taro_twist]

Wooo, let's see if I can finish this comment before you log back on!

So I see that Clark _does_ have Gmail after all. :D I continue to love little things like how you show that he went home with the switch in email addresses ... well, either he went home, or he randomly got Gmail in the middle of the day because he wanted to be like Bruce. *grin* But metro_blues? Aww, poor Clark. I guess he would have the metropolitan blues ... he is a country boy at heart, after all! Or maybe he's just a blues music fan :P

I loved the last few emails, with Clark asking Bruce to call him if he needs help and then asking Oracle to tell him if Bruce needs help ... it's so touching when the boys worry about each other. :D

Jumping around some ... this was an awesome line:

Don’t worry, B has everything but Superman’s copyright under control.

LOL. Bruce, you're slacking!

And you got me with this one:

Subject:Puppy loveAnd here I thought that Clark was about to confess the beginnings of a crush on Bruce, lol, although of course that wouldn't

[arch_schatten]

Clark does have gmail! he's at home indeed, checking on his batty friend :) And I have no idea what the Metropolis team uniform is, but I thought blue would be fitting. Metropolis Monarchs, wikipedia says, is Clark's favorite team. I was thinking more of sports than music or sadness, but they both fit well! I really like the metropolitan blues interpretation, awwww! secret woobie! ...I'm stealing that one because is better than what I thought, lol

[batfan_sarah]

*fangirl chortle of dorky glee*

Whee.

[arch_schatten]

LOL, your icons is fav! I... I desire it. I guess that pretty gal is you, isn't it? hrmm. ..I wanna kiss Batman too!!

Seeing you read all the crack in one sitting is filling me with glee :D Go, crack team!

[genclay]

yum yum yum, gose to the next one :D

[arch_schatten]

:) I'm so glad you enjoyed them! thank you!