(FIC) Pyre of his heart (Superman/Batman, NC-17)

[arch_schatten]

Nghhh I am sorry this if finished so late! I got to say I probably bit more than I could chew, sex pollen is.. nghh. Fight scenes and smut! @.@ But last night I sat down and wrote about three thousand words of smut, haha, so, erm. Here it is. I am sorry for the weirdness. It was 3 am. But I had a blast! It was a lot of fun, and I think after, what

Comments

[kirax2]

Wow. WOW. This was SO. FUCKING. HOT. Just...GUH. I loved Clark's thought processes in the beginning, when he's starting to be affected by the pollen. Just, everything. Fantastic.

Thank you so much!

[arch_schatten]

Yay! thank youu! (so late replying, mannnn, I'm sorry!) I'm very glad you enjoyed this, I loved writing it, Clark being slowly affected by the sex pollen and having his thoughts derail was a lot of fun *grins* thank youuu for reading! :D

[dizmo]

I... gunrnghsdkfasdflkjsdf I don't think I can actually make any coherent feedback?

That was so ridiculously hot.... and yet so amazingly schmoopy at the same time. I... applaud you, seriously.

*fans self*

[arch_schatten]

LOL, I love your icon! XD

I'm so glad you liked this! hot and schmoopy, yay! I was definitely aiming for that. Thank you for reading it!

[mithen]

My prompt my prompt OMG!

Clark pushed his glasses up his nose and straightened his jacked. "Maybe I wouldn't trip with you so often if you weren't always stalking me, Mr. Wayne."

Hee, I love their banter at the beginning, the way they're all playful and possessive:

"Nuh-uh, they better find their own boytoy. This one's taken."

Yeah, that. Yum. I love Clark's casual confidence in that, you write them together so well, so comfortable with each other and their relationship.

"You know, that's the second time I hear that today. My boyfriend was very insistent earlier about the exact same thing when I was getting ready."

I don't know why I love this line so much, but I do! Identity porn FTW!

Oh, this was very bad. This was terrible. This was dangerous. Bruce would be so mad. He would growl at him when all this was over, his voice low, the sound a silky caress to the base of his skull, and he would pace while he ranted, talking about strategy, about proper preparation, circling him like a panther, pushing him, touching him, telling

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[arch_schatten]

LOL, glad you enjoyed it, LBR! It was a lot of fun to write, thank you for reading!

[arch_schatten]

I loved writing this, it was such a.. you know, just, sat down and started with the sex pollen affecting Clark and everything just kept going! It's hard to write smut but I think it was pretty cool to finally dip my feet in the sex pollen lake :P And I totally grabbed the hand of your sex pollen story 'More' to write this one, lol. Immobilized Clark! hohoho. Seriously, I was shamelessly referencing your story :P I would say I'm sorry but I'm not! it's just that it's one of my favorite sex pollen stories ever, it can't be helped

[hyperactivator]

wonderfull. I love Ivy's motivations.

[arch_schatten]

Thank you! Very glad you enjoyed it :)

[hitokaji]

Ohhhh, that was HOT!!
Phew! *fans self* And Ivy is always one of my favourite villians. She's so cool! :)
Sex pollen does never get old. Tee hee. Love it, my dear! Welld-ne!

[arch_schatten]

Yay! So glad you liked it! I really like Ivy too, I have to agree with her pretty often... I had a lot of fun writing the sex pollen, thank you so much for reading!