Comments | arch_schatten: (FIC) Infinite (Bruce, PG-13)

arch_schatten

(FIC) Infinite (Bruce, PG-13)

Feb 28, 2009 22:08

This ficlet (drabblet?) was double the length but... it was... I don't know, gave away too much. So I trimmed it. And trimmed it. Aaand then trimmed it some more. I'm not sure if it makes sense outside my head anymore, so, uh, sorry? Bruce got all Groundhog Day on me, and not in a good way. Also, you all probably know how much I love Owlman.

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fic, bruce wayne, gen

Comments 15

__marcelo March 1 2009, 06:14:20 UTC

*hugs both you and Bruce* AWESOME!!!

That's exactly what he'd do, given the situation and the encroaching madness...

arch_schatten March 2 2009, 05:05:27 UTC

I'm sure that, in a loop, Bruce would probably try anything and everything.. I was discussing with my brother if it was a worse fate for him to live forever, never aging, always fighting a fight that has no end, or grow ever older and feeble. Both seems.. hellish fates, but I don't know what would be worse for Bruce...

*hugs back* I'm glad you liked it, yay!

schala_kid March 1 2009, 06:31:56 UTC

ACFGAFSFGFGDFGAFG!!! Why aren't you writing an official Batman comic? Why?!?! Mina have I told you how much I love the way you write Bruce? Because I do, he's angsty but never emo and he's always resilient!

He’s going to find a way out of it, somehow.

He has all the time in the world.

And never gives up (I love those two lines, because it's true he has nothing to lose from his countless of tries). Also I love the fact that you hinted at him being Owlman, I would so die of awesomeness if that happens.

If Shilo Norman and Sonny Sumo beat Omega Sanction then Bruce will pummel it to the ground and make it his bitch.

arch_schatten March 2 2009, 05:09:39 UTC

Yay! thank you! I'm so glad you liked this! I like my Bruce emo but resilient, and crazy but maybe saner than I think! I'm so tickled this worked for you! woot!

I would so die of happiness if the identity of Owlman in the Outsiders is someone awesome (like Bruce). With Alfred leading the Outsiders, it would make me go all :D :D :D

LOL at Bruce making the Omega Sanction his bitch. He totally will, though. Bruce doesn't care about stupid sanctions. Thank you for reading!

saavikam77 March 1 2009, 16:13:39 UTC

Wow... O_O Poor Bruce...

arch_schatten March 2 2009, 05:19:27 UTC

I know.. I... have too much fun putting him through the wringer :/ he needs some relaxing! he's had a bad year! (again!)

starsandsea March 1 2009, 18:57:24 UTC

Oh, wow... *pets Bruce*

That is so, so what he would do.

I think these are my favorite lines:

The goggles cover his eyes completely, which is a good thing. If the eyes are the mirror of the soul, then he’s clearly in the need of some redemption.

I'm not sure why, but... that just really speaks to me. Bruce becoming Owlman!! That is cool and a little freaky.

And then the last lines... *hugs Bruce* Have I told you I love your Bruce? Because I do. So very much. *hearts him*

arch_schatten March 2 2009, 05:22:17 UTC

He... is having a troubled year! again! he seriously needs some time to get himself together... I really want to see how he beats the Omega Sanction!

I'm glad you like my Bruce muse! he likes you too, hee! X) He's very amendable to crazy stuff :P

quiet__tiger March 2 2009, 00:20:30 UTC

I don't know what's going on here, not having read the crisis or know anything about Owlman, but the prose is beautiful.

arch_schatten March 2 2009, 05:24:20 UTC

I suspect it has to do with.. me not making much sense! There's an Owlman whose identity is unknown at the moment in The Outsiders (Owlman usually being Tommy Wayne, Bruce's brother in Earth 3, so, you know, evil) and I was all.. 'omega sanction deux ex machina!'... I'm glad the prose works, though! thank you for reading! :D