Fic: Iron Man; Dance4Life

[arcanelegacy]

Dance4Life
Iron Man Movie!verse; Gen. One-Shot. Set before the events of Iron Man.
Tony buys a house in Dubai and decides to break it in the best way he knows how: by throwing the biggest party possible.

Comments

[marienomad]

I can picture this happening. Especially since we all know what happened with Tony's last birthday party. It does feel a little abrupt. Makes me wonder what Pepper did during the party.

[arcanelegacy]

Oh, good! All I ever hope is that my fics feel like they could happen. :D

After having it up here I'm thinking I might have to go back and rework it some more. It's...more than what I'd normally call a draft, but it's at the stage all of my fics go through at least once where the bones and muscle are there, but the finishing details aren't. But we'll see. XD I got another thirty-something of these to figure out, and my list keeps trying to get longer.

[pintsizeninja]

Eeee, yay! I'm so excited you posted more fic! And a bonus, it's part of the Elements of Life series! This totally made my day! :D

Even though it was the first one you wrote for the series, I think it's great. It's a little choppy, but you've still got their mannerisms/voices down pat. I especially love that Tony totally thinks about Pepper and all she does for him, but then gets distracted. That's so totally him and it makes me feel so bad for Pepper because we all know how much he cares for her and appreciates her, he's just shit at remembering to say it/show he cares.

A perfect slice of life. And I love how you wove Tiësto in there.

*hugs* Can't wait to read more. :)

[arcanelegacy]

NGL, BB, I SAW THIS COMMENT AND KINDA WAILED. The first fic I know you've read in a while, and it's one of my less polished and less awesome ones. XDXD

THANK YOU. ;_; I always fret about these two. JUST WANT TO GET IT RIGHT. It makes me really happy to find that other people think I do get them right. Might need to fix the choppiness, though.

I HAS MORE ON THE WAY AND I THINK I SNUCK IN A POST WHILE YOU WERE AWAY. At least one. Maybe two. (I've been on a bit of a writing cycle - several weeks OMG ON, WRITING WRITING WRITINGS, then several weeks of lethargy and DNW. It's gotten hard for me to remember what I did when and whether or not I posted it, fff)