Supernatural fic: "Freak" (2/3) (Sam/Dean, R)

[arby_m]

Fandom: Supernatural
Title: Freak (2/3)
Author: arby_m
Pairing: Sam/Dean slash
Rating: R (angst, cussing, incest)
Spoilers: AU for Skin. Some dialogue referenced from the episode

Comments

[insano_chick]

"Together they were a family, though a wounded and broken one - alone they were just two weird losers constantly on the run."

I have to say, I loved that sentence. Also, I think you captured the conflict between 'want' and 'duty' that Dean goes through beautifully. Can't wait for more and thank you for what you have written. Without talented fanfic authors I would actually get 8 hours of sleep, and who wants that?

[arby_m]

Oh, thank you so much! Working on the last chapter now.

Poor Dean, he never gives himself a break. *huggles woobie*

[1shotjunkie]

“It’s not about what I want. It’s about what’s right. And me, making moves on you? Not right.”

“But you’re not making a move on me.” His voice went lower, became almost sultry. “I’m making a move on you.”

*giggles* I love it! This is just so... perfect. I like how you didn't make them all over each other in the first second (though that would be unbelievably hot) but you timed it out. It really shows Dean and Sams inner feelings for each other.

Bravo!

[arby_m]

Thanks so much!

Yeah, I try to write PWP sometimes, but those damn feelings keep sneaking in there. :) I think the closest I've come is "Bitch"... Coincidentally or not, it appears to be my most popular story as well.