43 - still_ciircee

May 21, 2009 17:25

Do the time warp! This is set sometime during one of Aiba's earlier trips out of town, but some time before the trip on which he meets Sho. Now, back to trying to find a purpose for Shun aside from groping Nino so that he can laugh at Jun and cop a feel off of him. Also: To learn to read. And spell.

Aiba )

!still_ciircee

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nicefinalbeam May 21 2009, 22:40:20 UTC
They keep walking in companionable silence until it's too dark and cold to want to keep moving. They find a handy corpse of trees and some particularly low branches under which they spread out Aiba's sleeping bag.

A CORPSE OF TREES? THIS FIC IS SO DARK OMG.

;) ;)

God, Ilu so much for bringing Daigo into this. I... no words. Love this.
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still_ciircee May 21 2009, 22:48:37 UTC
...a-at least I cut out the 'murder of crows'? *toddles off to edit* You'd think by now I'd learn to double check that word. I do this ALL THE TIME. I like dead trees, I guess.

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nicefinalbeam May 21 2009, 22:51:17 UTC
BA DOOM CH! :D :D :D

I type 'show' as 'Sho' now. Half the time when I type "The Quiz Sho", I'm not making a joke, my brain is just confused. LOL.

I've been missing you lateeeely. Glad to see you around.
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still_ciircee May 21 2009, 22:56:17 UTC
I've missed being around! I could live with coughing my lungs out and being miserable if only it didn't make me too tired to do anything online.

Shun is not helping matters. >.<

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still_ciircee May 21 2009, 22:52:37 UTC
I love Daigo so hard. I love the way he talks--it's like he's going to say something deep or meaningful and then he's a genius-moron like Aiba instead. I should have an Aiba/Daigo icon, too. Who makes icons and how can we hit them up?

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waxrose May 21 2009, 22:54:36 UTC
STEPHEN HARPER ♥

I will try, try to be coherent, except that you MADE STEPHEN HARPER A SHEEP AND DAIGO AND DAIGO IS FROM MY TOWN. I wass laughing so hard that I actually started crying. I am so glad you brought Daigo in, SO AMAZING.

Also, Aiba calling home and the homesickness. :(((

One point I'm a little confused on though, time-wise - I think Part 30 ended with Sho picking up Aiba (although on re-read, I guess it could really refer to any car), so then would the last line of this part coincide with our timeline - because if so, doesn't it basically tells us how Aiba leaves town at the end of our current saga? I'm probably mis-reading this.

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still_ciircee May 21 2009, 23:02:51 UTC
Ahh--I thought thirty was about the first time Aiba left town, and that he's been back and forth a few times (I think it's one of the Jun bits that made me think that) but now that you said it, it makes sense that it's probably Sho. In which case this is, um, totally NOT after part thirty but way before it. I can take that note out.

Also: Daigo made Stephen Harper a sheep. On the idea that you could probably totally hug him and pet him like a sheep and he would be a people-sheep. Harper is fuzzy and woolly on the inside!

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waxrose May 21 2009, 23:13:51 UTC
It's hard to tell, we'll have to ask primroseshows, because while Aiba has left before, the timeline gets a little skewed around the beginning and whether or not that was Sho that picked him up at the end of Part 30 will determine where this gets placed.

I am just. Still so gleeful about that. HARPERSHEEP. Also, check the interests. I've added 3-4 new ones from this chapter. :D

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waxrose May 21 2009, 23:34:30 UTC
It just occurred to me that primroseshow's part must refer to one of the earlier times Aiba left, because it refers to missing Jun re. what happened between them the night of Aiba's good-bye party, and that was before the first time that he left, so this has to go after Part 30 - so assuming that, then the car must not have been Sho, so we're safe, timeline-wise.

This is too complicated. @_________@

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silentchord May 21 2009, 23:11:18 UTC
Wonderful! You totally got Daigo's voice down. I could hear it in my head. That sexy, sleepy bemused drawl of his XD

Aiba/Daigo interaction is so underrated. They're clearly meant to be. In some strange, strange way ♥

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still_ciircee May 23 2009, 02:50:01 UTC
Bemused! Yes! This is the word I'm always looking for when it comes to Daigo. Thank you! I LOVE the way he talks so I'm glad you think I got his voice right.

Clearly, Aiba and Daigo were destined! They were probably brothers in a past life. TWIN brothers. They died by blowing themselves up in the coolest experiment EVER.

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bitterbee May 21 2009, 23:23:14 UTC
Brilliant. Aiba + Daigo should happen more often, definitely.

All the sheep stuff reminds me of Connie Willis's Bellwether. ^_^

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still_ciircee May 23 2009, 02:52:39 UTC
lol For a moment I thought your comment said 'Brilliant Aiba + Daigo'. \o/ Now I shall have to find that novel.

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bitterbee May 23 2009, 20:10:03 UTC
Aiba is frequently brilliant, but here I meant you. Aiba here is maybe just amazingly radiant...

Connie Willis is awesome in general, but Bellwether has sheep running amok. ^_^

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