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lilly0 September 4 2016, 08:42:28 UTC
Sorry for snagging the first spot, but this was soooooooooooooo good! I loved the whole setting :D And all the characters, and pairs. And the little secret some of them have ;-) (and I love the conclusion at the end!)

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kirasebi September 22 2016, 11:19:19 UTC
Thank you for your lovely comment :) I'm really happy you liked it as I had really fun writing it

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astrangerenters September 4 2016, 15:16:14 UTC
I like the hopeful ending for Jun and Toma. I'm pretty sure that Jun is the kind of person who would accept Toma for who he is, whatever form he takes on :)

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kirasebi September 22 2016, 11:19:55 UTC
Yes, he is that kind of person. So Toma has nothing to fear at all :D Thank you for laving a comment.

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nicefinalbeam September 5 2016, 11:28:44 UTC
So many interesting concepts in this fic!! The shapeshifting is wonderful, but also the hesitance to be in a relationship with someone in case they might not understand. It makes sense ♥ I enjoyed the image of Nino carrying around fish!Ohno lol

I love any time that Jun's bad luck with animals is mentioned, but I also love that you hinted that the turtles are okay with him, given what we find out about Toma heh heh.

A nice hopeful ending too :D

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kirasebi September 22 2016, 11:21:52 UTC
I'm happy that you liked it. Thank you for your comment.
The image of Nino carrying around Ohno as a fish was the first that came to my mind somehow. And then I tried to find an animal Jun would be okay with and as far as I know he got pet turtles from Nino one time? So that was why I decided to put him there XD

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anonymous September 5 2016, 16:46:21 UTC
Just a quick clarification: I read part one and part two in the first installment and this installment is starting from part four. Is this just a typo or am I missing part three somewhere??

Aaaaaaaah I just want to make sure I don't miss a single word of this wonderful gift

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stormymood September 5 2016, 16:58:10 UTC
Hello there!

Thanks for the head's up. I think you might be right. Part 3 is missing in the original document, which is why I didn't notice, but I also have the seperated chapters of the fic and there is indeed a part 3 --> added it now, but will check with the author if it's okay like that.

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nande_daiyo September 5 2016, 17:00:03 UTC

Hey I saw the answer. Sorry for commenting again!! But I'm so excited that there is a whole new part. So excited

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nande_daiyo September 5 2016, 16:58:18 UTC

Hey I commented as anon (the app is really kicking my butt) so I'm commenting about this again. The last installment ends on part two and this one starts with four. Am I missing something or is it typo? I just want to make sure I don't miss a single word of this wonderful gift.

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stormymood September 5 2016, 17:00:06 UTC
Hello there! (just answered to your anon-comment *lol*)

Thanks for the head's up. I think you might be right. Part 3 is missing in the original document I received though, which is why I didn't notice - I just posted it. But I also have the seperated chapters of the fic and there is indeed a part 3 --> added it now, but will check with the author if it's okay like that.

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nande_daiyo September 5 2016, 17:10:44 UTC

Just saw that comment!! Thanks so much!!

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