I know. That's one of my favorite's part in this chapter. Actually I got the idea from my older sister, she got an amazing talent as a house-chef (because she devoted her time and talents to make our lunches and dinners) when she tried to understand why her new Nokia doesn't working properly two days ago.
So I thought, she got this funny expression and do all silly methods... obviously her talents inside our kitchen didn't reach for to gadgets. Seriously, she only need to take off the battery and let the phone reboot... hehehe ^_^
OK, I'm hooked. This is a very interesting story. You do need a Beta to help with some of the grammar, but the basics are wonderful. Keep going, please!
And I'm sorry with my grammars, English isn't my native language. I could understand when people talk or I need to read English literature or Newsweek. But for the life of me, I always got problem when I need to write even my teachers all giving up to correct that side of me. So I thought to write fanfic to correct my English and having fun is a great way to learn English ^_^
Secondly, somehow... I got problem to keep a beta. I always lost them, somehow. Oh well, everyone got their own lives, hopefully those missing-beta(s) could find free time for themselves and eventually, look to my stories.
Thanks for the review and I'm sorry for my grammars.
DO NOT APOLOGIZE....you are the one who just wrote a long and interesting story that I am hooked on! You are 100% right...this is the best way to learn. All I do is read. YOU ARE THE WRITER!
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Thanks for the read.
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So I thought, she got this funny expression and do all silly methods... obviously her talents inside our kitchen didn't reach for to gadgets. Seriously, she only need to take off the battery and let the phone reboot... hehehe ^_^
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And I'm sorry with my grammars, English isn't my native language. I could understand when people talk or I need to read English literature or Newsweek. But for the life of me, I always got problem when I need to write even my teachers all giving up to correct that side of me. So I thought to write fanfic to correct my English and having fun is a great way to learn English ^_^
Secondly, somehow... I got problem to keep a beta. I always lost them, somehow. Oh well, everyone got their own lives, hopefully those missing-beta(s) could find free time for themselves and eventually, look to my stories.
Thanks for the review and I'm sorry for my grammars.
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Hope the next chapter could come out before Christmas, stay tune!
Once again, thank you for the review! ^_^
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