I read AMM now (damn, I have not the umlauts on my keyboard!) and I liked it a lot - the only thing I was a little unsure about was the ending. It seems horribly unfair that poor Anna should have to suffer horrible pain when the other virgins deflowered over the course of the fic got away so comparatively lightly. I'd have rather seen that final scene be unrealistically perfect, than have all that buildup only to cringe so much that I nearly had to look away.
But apart from that I loved it and I am glad you did the other pairings the way you did, too. *love*
I know the ending is a bit. ah, bad in that tregard - but my Symbolic!Brain refused to lert go of the idea that it would have to be, well, excessively painful due to the fact that Anna 's innocence has been so central to the story - and alas, symbolic brain can beat smut-brain on most days. *sighs* *Intends to remedy this by filling the sequel with lots of painlless smut*
am glad you liked the other pairings - they just... well, I never intended on any of them. thye just snuck up on me 0_o
Hmm... I have to say I disagree with your symbolic!brain on that one, because I don't like the idea that loss of innocence has to be painful... the whole point of stories where the heroine runs off with the monster, to me, is that the monster will actually do her less harm than a more "acceptable" mate. I think we will have to agree to differ!
You may not have intended them, but they work - surely those are the best kind of pairings? :)
Yeah, we have to. mY symbolic brain is kind of weirds right now... who knows, I may end up rewriting the scene - it is,a fter all, the first draft :) lets both gang up on my symbolic brain idf I do? :D
Yup, they definitely are :;:D I swear, when I first came up with Ruusa the generic servant girl - named after my great-great grandmother, too! - i never thought she'd end up as, ah, involved as she did :P
right now I am trying to keep the various sequel bunnies in check - I swear, they are absolutely crazxy... I feel like such a fanbrat cause I want to write sequels that involve - gasp! - such things as canon/oc offsporing and so on, amongst other things (Like mutilating canon, in case there actually is canon for how Kalma became a zombie... :P )
as it is,t he problem is nto the amount of clothes - it's the lack of space to hang them to dry. becuase of that, I can do 2 baches, maxiimum, in a day - less, if it is sheets or somecuch.
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I read AMM now (damn, I have not the umlauts on my keyboard!) and I liked it a lot - the only thing I was a little unsure about was the ending. It seems horribly unfair that poor Anna should have to suffer horrible pain when the other virgins deflowered over the course of the fic got away so comparatively lightly. I'd have rather seen that final scene be unrealistically perfect, than have all that buildup only to cringe so much that I nearly had to look away.
But apart from that I loved it and I am glad you did the other pairings the way you did, too. *love*
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I know the ending is a bit. ah, bad in that tregard - but my Symbolic!Brain refused to lert go of the idea that it would have to be, well, excessively painful due to the fact that Anna 's innocence has been so central to the story - and alas, symbolic brain can beat smut-brain on most days. *sighs* *Intends to remedy this by filling the sequel with lots of painlless smut*
am glad you liked the other pairings - they just... well, I never intended on any of them. thye just snuck up on me 0_o
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You may not have intended them, but they work - surely those are the best kind of pairings? :)
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Yup, they definitely are :;:D I swear, when I first came up with Ruusa the generic servant girl - named after my great-great grandmother, too! - i never thought she'd end up as, ah, involved as she did :P
right now I am trying to keep the various sequel bunnies in check - I swear, they are absolutely crazxy... I feel like such a fanbrat cause I want to write sequels that involve - gasp! - such things as canon/oc offsporing and so on, amongst other things (Like mutilating canon, in case there actually is canon for how Kalma became a zombie... :P )
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as it is,t he problem is nto the amount of clothes - it's the lack of space to hang them to dry. becuase of that, I can do 2 baches, maxiimum, in a day - less, if it is sheets or somecuch.
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That means I need your address...
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