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Fic: How To Make a Better Vampire 16/24

Jan 28, 2013 17:43

Title: How To Make A Better Vampire
Chapter: 16 - Coming to Terms [Featured Characters: Damon, Elena, Matt, Rebekah and Stefan]
Author: JenniferH (Arabian)
Rating: M (For future chapters/language, sex, violence)
Summary: Post 3.22 -- Elena grapples with who she is as a vampire, struggling for control as she tries to find herself and accept who she ( Read more... )

damon salvatore, bonnie bennett, stefan salvatore, the vampire diaries, matt/rebekah, elena gilbert, fic: ...bettervampire, matt donovan, fic, damon/matt, rebekah mikaelson

Comments 14

woobloo February 6 2013, 03:23:02 UTC

This is a really great fic, and honestly, it just kept getting better. It's an awesome AU where everyone's just a tad more self-aware and honest, but still in character with all of the dysfunction that that implies ( ... )

arabian February 12 2013, 02:49:02 UTC

Thank you. I appreciate you letting me know.

RE; S/C, erm, I'll just say that they are listed in the notes as one of the pairings, uhm, yeah. :)

I adore Damon and Jeremy. I just think that Ian and SRM have great chemistry, and Damon and Jeremy have such an interesting dynamic. Even going back to their few scenes in season 01, they always just worked so well. As much as I'd love it, I don't think they'll ever go as far as I have on the show, so I'm having as much fun as I can with them in my fic.

I'm glad that D/E is working for you too, since they're the key focus of the story, LOL!

I'm in a bit of a slump writing right now, but I hope to get back on track this week. Thanks for commenting. :)

kalishaka April 13 2013, 17:27:40 UTC

“I don’t know. I don’t- I didn't ask Stefan to save Matt... to save Matt. Yes, I wanted him to live, but...” She trailed off as tears began to slip more steadily down her cheeks. Finally, with a nod, she spoke, her voice barely audible. “I did, Damon, I did want to die.” Sobs began to shake her and she looked up at him, barely seeing him through her tears. “I wanted to die.” She felt, rather than saw, him pull her into his arms. She shook her head even as she buried it into his chest, her words muffled. “I was supposed to die with my parents. I was supposed to die with them that night in the creek.”Ugh. Yes. Perfect. And everything that follows....her overwhelming guilt....the feeling of responsibility for the losses of everyone are all so spot on ( ... )

arabian April 14 2013, 04:26:57 UTC

I wanted readers to get where Elena was coming from, and fortunately, this chapter did actually do that for some that had been grumbling about her.

And I ADORE the Rebekah scene.

This chapter took FOREVER to write, trying to get that break-up right. man.