Paper Faces | Epilogue

May 14, 2014 07:54


Epilogue

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nc-17, paper faces, fan-fic

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locknkey May 14 2014, 19:37:50 UTC
I really enjoyed this. There was enough mis-understanding to create tension, but it was never over-played. I loved seeing them come together and Jared really becoming comfortable with all side of himself!. :)

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ar_richardson May 14 2014, 20:31:43 UTC
Thanks!I'm really happy you didn't think the tension was over-played, there was definitely the opportunity to really go over the top with that prompt. Thanks for reading! :)

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ephermeralk May 15 2014, 02:10:43 UTC
Awesome! What a great fic :) I very much enjoyed that Jared was able to take off his mask in the end! And it felt really well paced to me.

Oh yeah. And hot, too ;)

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ar_richardson May 15 2014, 03:37:03 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad the pacing worked for you. It's going to be a lifelong struggle for this Jared, I think, with his shyness, but he's willing to work on it! Thanks again for reading and commenting.

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tebtosca May 15 2014, 21:38:57 UTC
Love it! It had just the right amount of schmoop for the challenge, but also had a real tension to it. Love that Jared danced for him at the end :D

Great job <3

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ar_richardson May 15 2014, 23:00:27 UTC
Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it. :)

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laurathelurker May 16 2014, 02:00:34 UTC
This was very lovely. I'm glad you did not go as drawn out and angsty as the prompt pointed to. And so happy that Jared with the help of Jensen and his new therapist was able to dance without his mask and break through his fear.

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ar_richardson May 16 2014, 02:20:06 UTC
Aw thanks sweetie. Honestly I don't know that I could have made it as angsty as the prompt, lol. I'd have had to make Jensen a huge dirtbag and really make it seem like he was a cheating jerk, and I didn't want to go there. I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reading.

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herminekurotowa May 16 2014, 06:05:44 UTC
aaaawwwwww *sighs*

This is just the right kind of schmoopy and adorable and cute. ♥

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ar_richardson May 16 2014, 06:41:10 UTC
Thank you! That is exactly what I was going for :)

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