Billy challenge!!

Nov 28, 2012 22:30

title: Old Wounds
author: redrockcan
words: 200
A/N: A bit late in posting this, but here is my spaceson drabble. Thanks to defyingnormalcy for the beta!!

Some burdens we carry forever. )

challenge 119: spaceson, author: redrockcan

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defyingnormalcy November 29 2012, 03:36:30 UTC
Poor Billy. :(

My heart really aches for both of them here, in a way, they've both lost a child through Billy's death. But as Bill notes, they have barely any time left, and he'll have plenty of time to mourn them both very soon. :( Lovely drabble.

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redrockcan November 30 2012, 03:27:55 UTC
Thanks!! *sniff* Hard to write Billy and not get emotional!! We miss the boy so much!! This is one I really should write from Laura's pov as well. That would be interesting. :)

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mellow_mel November 29 2012, 05:53:21 UTC
No need to appoligize for being late on one Drabble when you just posted lovely smutty Drabble of win!!!
Lol

(Icon for smutty Drabble, not this one!)

You wrote an excellent detailed discription of bills thoughts,
Beautiful emotions!!!
And sweet sick Laura :,( so sad... Yet lovely!

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redrockcan November 30 2012, 03:29:28 UTC
Hee hee!! Thanks Mel. Glad you enjoy the more serious drabbles as well as the secksy ones!! :)

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bsg_aussiegirl November 30 2012, 11:52:01 UTC
I always find that scene in Sacrifice so odd. I think something more must have happened.

At least you are giving Bill and Laura a couple of happy days. Beautiful last line. *sniff*

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redrockcan December 3 2012, 12:57:20 UTC
I will have to go back and ponder what else may have been going on. I always just thought it was Laura losing Billy and the future she saw for the fleet politically. Yes YAY!! for happy days. We'll take whatever we can get!! :)

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fragrantwoods December 4 2012, 13:20:00 UTC
So sad and poignant to see what Bill thought about Billy and Laura's losing him, and then trying to balance whether to say something or let it go. Nicely done 1st person :-)

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