Comments | ar_drabbles: Things heat up at the cafe!!

redrockcan in ar_drabbles

Things heat up at the cafe!!

Nov 27, 2012 17:51

title: Body and Soul
author: redrockcan
words:2 x 300
rating: MA (that is not a typo, hee)
A/N: Another chapter of Biscotti!Bill. The previous one can be found here Moving Things Along. Thanks to defyingnormalcy for the beta!!

( Bill knew all the right moves. )

series: biscotti bill, author: redrockcan

Comments 21

defyingnormalcy November 27 2012, 22:56:48 UTC

MA (that is not a typo, hee)

LOL! Best rating ever. :P

You know that I love this already. But I will say it again and in public, this is a fabulous, hot, sweet, sexy, and long awaited chapter. :D You write smut so well, TOLD YOU SO! This is at once hot as hell, but even more amazing because of the slow build up to this point, and because it's so very clear that they love and respect each other completely. Good job my friend for writing some of the most emotionally satisfying, and downright sexy smut I've ever read. :D :D :D

redrockcan November 28 2012, 03:16:34 UTC

Awww thanks for all your help and support!! Hee hee!! It only took my like two months to write and post this!! I am a smut coward I will admit!! How did I end up in this fandom?!! Well it was pretty smut!! I'm glad it was hot and yet still held the emotion!! :)

mellow_mel November 27 2012, 23:12:03 UTC

OMG !!!!! I haven't even read it yet!!!

redrockcan November 28 2012, 03:17:13 UTC

I patiently await your thoughts on my smut Mel!! :) I hope it lives up to your high standards!! ;)

mellow_mel November 28 2012, 03:27:57 UTC

I'm not sure if I've ever been interrupted more while reading 600 words!!! Lol KIdS!

If I didn't know better I would think you had written PLenty of yummy smut before;-)
It was sweet and lovely! Everything A/R smut should be most if the time anyway

redrockcan November 28 2012, 03:53:28 UTC

Hee hee!! Maybe I have!! ;) Glad you enjoyed the pretty smut!! Go way kids mama is busy!!

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nixmom November 28 2012, 01:01:36 UTC

Did you hear that?!?! That was my jaw hitting the floor. It's a world gone mad. Red wrote smut! Hot sexy satisfying Bill and Laura smut! If I believed in Mayan apocalyptic prophecy I would wonder if this wasn't on their list of signs of the end times.

Your messing with my view of the world woman!!!

Well done.

redrockcan November 28 2012, 03:26:14 UTC

Hee hee!! The end is near!! Well it was bound to happen sooner or later. They had to have sex in one of my series for goodness sake. I couldn't keep having them make coffee and biscotti over and over, well maybe I could have. :) I hope you enjoyed!!

afrakaday November 28 2012, 01:11:46 UTC

THEY DID IT!!! YOU DID IT!!!

:D

This is gorgeous. I really love this line, Her whole life wound down to that one sliver of eternity she felt as his name fell from her lips one more time. Nicely done!

redrockcan November 28 2012, 03:27:15 UTC

Yes they did it!! Woo hoo!! :) Glad you enjoyed and that was one of my favourite lines!! :) Okay back to making lattes now!!

larsfarm77 November 28 2012, 04:03:57 UTC

Sweet, hot and sexy ... and the words in Tauron?

Ngh.

Perfect.

Oh, and I grinned when I saw your current location!!

redrockcan November 28 2012, 12:40:45 UTC

Thanks lars!! Yes I love Bill whispering in Tauron!! Phew!! Yes I was posting from work. Bad redrock!!