Recovery drabble!!

Nov 21, 2012 22:08

title: How Can You Mend A Broken Admiral?
author:redrockcan
words:300
A/N: Thanks to defyingnormalcy for the beta!!

Laura had a way to heal his wounds. )

author: redrockcan, challenge 120: recovery

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defyingnormalcy November 22 2012, 03:32:48 UTC
This is such a wonderful time in their relationship, there is so much potential and so much subtext, and you really capitalize on that here. I absolutely LOVED the closing line. It really packs a punch. Nicely done!

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redrockcan November 22 2012, 03:48:58 UTC
Woo hoo!! We are rocking the ar fics today!! I hadn't written the day after the "dance" so I thought it would be an interesting scene. Poor sore and swollen Bill and Laura her usual sarcastic self, but underneath she is as broken as he is by the ferocity of the fight and all that it meant. Bill needed some tender lovin' care and she needed to give it. :)

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missbevcrusher November 22 2012, 23:26:29 UTC
Bill is ♥

I loved this little story, especially the last few lines. Thanks for sharing.

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redrockcan November 23 2012, 03:09:35 UTC
I agree, he is. :) I love after the dance fics. Thanks for your comments. :)

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mellow_mel November 24 2012, 14:59:30 UTC
Overwhelmed, Laura pulled him close and whispered in his ear, her voice catching in her throat, “Bill, don’t ever do that to me again.”

:-)

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redrockcan November 25 2012, 03:38:45 UTC
That fight was pretty brutal, Laura must have been shaken up seeing Bill so bloodied. She needed to make him feel better with her brand of TLC and of course a creamy chai latte after!! Heh!!

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akachankami November 24 2012, 15:43:35 UTC
awwwwww, boxing bill pouting OMG the cuteness!!!! ♥ i could never resist that, i can't blame laura for kissing her way to admiral lips through fingers and biceps XD ♥

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redrockcan November 25 2012, 03:39:55 UTC
Hee hee!! Laura definitely kissed that pout off his face!! Bill needed some serious bicep love and care after the fight!! :)

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newnumbertwo November 25 2012, 21:49:46 UTC
I love Laura's method of winning arguments--and helping Bill recover. "You don't want to talk? Fine. I'll kiss you all over and then you'll see things my way." This is why Laura is the BGE.

♥ ♥ ♥

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