(112) Under A Name

Jul 08, 2012 00:12

Title: Under A Name
Rating: M.. ish..
Author: marzipanilla

Notes: This prompt sort of just made me have a metaphysical conversation with myself, and I tried my best to apply that to a/r. It sort of turned into more of a bizarre application of them as dolls in a scene I don't ever see playing out between them; and quais-smut decided to apply itself as well.

Under your vestment lies a name, under that name, a person )

author: marzipanilla, challenge 112: behind the mask

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akachankami July 8 2012, 14:32:34 UTC
oh! *O* *blushes*

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marzipanilla July 8 2012, 19:05:19 UTC
:D

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fragrantwoods July 8 2012, 15:33:56 UTC
Love the primal nature you strip them down to...seems like they liked it, too :-)

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marzipanilla July 8 2012, 19:07:30 UTC
Heh, well, stripping down in general...

Thanks :)

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newnumbertwo July 8 2012, 17:22:56 UTC
This was really neat and sexy! Awesome.

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marzipanilla July 8 2012, 19:07:49 UTC
Thanks!

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bugsfic July 8 2012, 17:57:27 UTC
You skeered me with your note, that my po' brain wasn't going to get it, but this is exactly how I see the characters. Shedding the tough layers, or putting them back on when necessary.

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marzipanilla July 8 2012, 19:32:27 UTC
Meep, didn't mean to skeer you... My mind will overly complicate simple things sometimes.

Glad you enjoyed it, and read regardless of the note!

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afrakaday July 8 2012, 20:53:14 UTC
I love that you are finally embracing your inner smut!queen! LOL!

This is fantastic. So clever and hot.

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marzipanilla July 8 2012, 21:20:43 UTC
My inner smut!queen is a horny demanding brat... who's liable to get what she wants.

Glad you like this :)

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