First Night

[wishflsinfl]

Title: First Night
Author: wishflsinfl
Word Count: 200
A/N: Couldn't resist the name of this challenge

Comments

[mibehl]

I loved this. :D

[wishflsinfl]

Thank you, it was fun to write!

[hollywobbles]

Bill (and a ton of other people) knowing about Adar -- what a fresh and interesting take! That's something to think about, Laura! Love it. :)

[wishflsinfl]

Well, maybe not a ton of other people. :) But I could see some covert hijinks going on if the military has gotten bored with 40 years of peace.

[hollywobbles]

Hee. And now I'm picturing a bunch of old military officers bored and giggling over Laura's love life like a gaggle of 13 yr old girls. Lol.

[wishflsinfl]

And why does this remind me of the scene in Evita where the old generals are all dancing around singing about the president's mistresses? BSG: The Musical.

[defyingnormalcy]

LOVE this. I really believe that Bill knew about Laura's affair with Adar, and I truly believe that he would not have cared about her sexual history. He loved her so completely, he would have forgiven her for anything. <3

Thank you for sharing this, and good on you for tackling a dialogue only fic - that is qute a challenge! :D

Also, I *love* that Bill was protecting her before he fell in love with her. Destiny or what? :P

[wishflsinfl]

Also, I *love* that Bill was protecting her before he fell in love with her. Destiny or what?

I hadn't thought of it that way, but yes. And I love dialogue, especially A/R dialogue.

[wishflsinfl]

Not sad! Yeah!

[wishflsinfl]

Do you ever write longer fics?

I've been known to. I mean, it could happen. :)

[frakcancer]

There's something very liberating about finding out that what you thought was a deep, dark secret isn't. I wonder how Laura would act around Bill after finding out that he's not in the dark, never was, and isn't at all shocked by the light.

[wishflsinfl]

Hmmm, you just gave the "in the dark" part of this a whole new meaning.