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bsg_aussiegirl in ar_drabbles

Who said mods can't be indulgent?

Aug 29, 2010 13:42

Title: Ani Maamin
Author: bsg_aussiegirl
Rated T
(200) word drabble
Not my characters/not making money

Especially written for my co-mod frakcancer who shall now have to write me some sort of multi chapter fic, I think. *snort*

Thanks to lacklusterfic for reading through and making sure it sounded okay. But, Frak, don't blame her if I got the title incorrect.

( Anything is possible in a/u )

author: bsg_aussiegirl, challenge 024: a/u

Comments 26

wernotalone August 30 2010, 00:08:28 UTC

My drunken tummy tells me this is totally adorable and romantic.

bsg_aussiegirl August 30 2010, 03:30:46 UTC

One should probably always listen to one's drunken tummy, I guess. LOL.

kastari August 31 2010, 08:28:07 UTC

holy crap!

Ani Ma'amin (אני מאמין) "I believe" is a prosaic rendition of Maimonides' thirteen-point version of the Jewish principles of faith.

FTW!

A most excellent student you are at Kastari's School of Titling.

THIS is a beautiful drabble.

bsg_aussiegirl August 31 2010, 10:06:08 UTC

So, this title means I've graduated?

Actually, it did turn out to be a beautiful drabble. The discussion/prompt was so crazy, but somehow it worked.

kastari August 31 2010, 15:14:46 UTC

You are definitely at the top of your class! Graduating with high marks is a given. However, learning is a lifetime endeavor. I'm thrilled that you now understand how important titles of any written work truly are.

The discussion/prompt worked in a most spectacular way.

redrockcan September 2 2010, 03:09:40 UTC

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!! That is so sweet, wonderful job. A friend of mine converted a while ago, not an easy thing to do. Bill would do anything for her of course. Poor Adar, he always gets some horrible fate, doesn't he? Love, love the last lines, "You're the diplomat, convince me" and of course the "you could make me believe" line. So nice to bring a little cannon in. My little shippy heart enjoyed this very much.

bsg_aussiegirl September 2 2010, 04:01:19 UTC

Adar had to end up in there as I needed Laura to be wearing a headscarf. Only married or widowed women wear them. We couldn't have her married! LOL.

Lack will tell you, I changed those last lines at least 40 times! Hopefully, they finally turned out!

northeto September 19 2010, 17:41:40 UTC

Oooh, I really like this. I can't say exactly why, but it's quite compelling.

bsg_aussiegirl September 19 2010, 22:15:21 UTC

Thanks. As improbable as the prompt was, I think it turned out quite beautiful (even if I don't say so myself! LOL).

I think it's because I can imagine Bill and Laura attending meetings together for months and him showing no sign that he had romantic thoughts even though he obviously did. That seems so Bill.