Walls

Dec 19, 2013 05:01


Walls, taekwoon + sanghyuk, 4.5k, 18+ for sexual content

You can’t hear Taekwoons footsteps; whether it’d be on rough carpet, squeaky floorboards or cracked marble, Taekwoon’s silence is as if he’s just floating above the ground. Which is why Sanghyuk was surprised that night, in the midst of deafening darkness and eerie silence, a brush of a kiss ( Read more... )

sanghyuk, leoxhyuk, hyuk, vixx, taehyuk, taekwoon, leo

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chasassyeon December 19 2013, 23:11:30 UTC
/rolls of earth/

DAMN THIS WAS GOOD.

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aquilaprisca December 20 2013, 01:41:57 UTC
thank youuuuu :3

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zqlin December 20 2013, 01:29:46 UTC
SCREAMS AT THIS OMG AND YOU WROTE SMUTTY THINGS I'M SO PROUD OF YOU /CRIES LOUDLY AND PATS YOUR BACK, WELCOME TO THE DARK SIDE, I LOVE YOU, I LOVE THIS, ENJOY YOUR STAY

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aquilaprisca December 20 2013, 01:41:46 UTC
caN YOU NOT GET SO EXCITED IM SO FRICKING EMBARASSED OMG I DONT EVEN KNOW HOW TWO GUYS RUBBING THEIR COCKS TOGETHER IN FEELS LIKE FUCK SAKE

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wykedpanda December 21 2013, 04:54:52 UTC
wah~ i've read that manga before and thought this piece had some similar elements to it. ive been falling hard for this ship lately, and you've done a wonderful job with it, particularly your descriptions of their confused emotions without drawing it out too much. i'm looking forward to reading more!!

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aquilaprisca December 21 2013, 14:54:31 UTC
actually one of my favourite yaoi mangas along with seven days tbh. i didn't really want to follow the plot or the 'line' motif the mangas has either because its not a matter that sanghyuk doesn't want to admit he's gay but its more like he doesn't understand the concept. other than that, i was just kind of obsessed with the little world they had in that room, i loved it. im glad you liked it though, really appreciate the comment ;;

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engraved_16 December 22 2013, 08:15:34 UTC
Askfjdfkl; omfg i just love this and leohyuk too!
The way you write is amazing. The overall tone you've set over it just paints everything so beautifully! the whole soft sound of curtains waving in the warmth of a rising sun, dust frantically dancing in the rays of light and where he opens his eyes to the faint glow of a lamp asfjdsk; the whole way you've written it give it such a mellow vibe yet it's still has this subtle darkness to it and it's not perfectly bright or happy and idk if what im saying makes any sense, but i just love everything, okay? <3

And the 'sex scene' i usually find frotting in a sense as 'dirty, wild, obscene' (not in a bad way though haha) i mean even the word 'frotting' just undertones a kind of grittiness doesn't it? But you manage to make the moment so initiate and passionate and just AJFSJSKL; Your writing!!! <333

I loved this, simply put :) <3

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aquilaprisca December 23 2013, 03:12:01 UTC
ajd a kdkzkskaozjs im so glad you liked it so much!!!! ;; goD DONT EVEN GET ME STARTED ON THE SEX SCENE I JUST HAD NO IDEA WHAT TO DO cause like im one for rlly hot and needy sex but not too wild and obscene eithet and having no prior experience with writing sexy time scenes I was lIKE FUCK ME LIFE but im glad it came out even seemingly as well as I intended. thank u again :D

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