Fic: If You Can't Stand the Heat, Part Two

[aquila_star]

Part One

Comments

[chyldofeternity]

Okay so like I'm falling asleep at my keyboard and I've only read part 1 so far and I really want to read part 2 but apparently my eyes are all like "NO! SCREW YOU! WE SLEEP NOW!"

Damned traitorous eyeballs. They'll get theirs one of these days!!

So yeah...Expect a better comment when I'm done part 2 tomorrow. Just wanted to say that I literally squeed out loud, in real life, in earshot of friends, when I found out this fic was posted.

[aquila_star]

I hope you like part two...I was thinking about you while posting it. ;)

Oh, and I started a new fic today, though who knows when it'll be done. Also, it's Glee fic, so yeah. ;) Still, I'm writing, right?

♥

[chyldofeternity]

Please tell me it's Puckurt. *crosses fingers and wishes madly*

>.>

[aquila_star]

omg, you are one of those! lol

No, I'm not a Puckurt shipper, though I'll take anything over Klaine. I ship Kurtofsky. :P Though, as I told dizilla, who also ships Puckurt, there will be some interaction, cause Puck is gonna go to bat for his boy...even if they don't end up together. :P

[ladytiferet]

I love this story, it's cute and funny and hot and romantic! And it made me hungry too ;P Great job, thank you!

[aquila_star]

You're welcome, thank you for the great comment. :D I'm glad you liked. :D

[chyldofeternity]

Okay so I finally finished it! It was great!! I loved it!

Now, I know how particular you are about spelling and stuff, so I say these with utmost adoration ^_^

-And yet, he still earned for something. For someone. <--
should say "yearned" right?

-The kiss deepened, becoming almost frantic as Marcus rubber himself against Esca, <-- should be "rubbed" yes?

BUT! This fic still totally means I need to go have a cold shower now cause it was awesome! Guh. Marcus and Esca are just so HOT! *fans himself*

[aquila_star]

OOh, thank you, I will go fix those...this is why you need a beat, cause even with two, things are still missed, lol.

Cheers, babe. I'm glad you liked it, and that yuo were a little more awake to read the end, lol. Enjoy your shower. ;)

[coeurdesoleil]

This was lovely! You did such a great job of slowly building the tension between Esca and Marcus all the way throughout the story that I felt almost ready to explode by the time they finally decided to do something about it :P

Also loved all the descriptions of cooking and food - I suddenly noticed I'm starving, and I'm feeling inspired to cook yay!

[aquila_star]

Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. :D Also, you are not the only one who got hungry reading the fic, my betas complained of the very same thing, lol.

Cheers. :D

[riventhorn]

I loved Esca ordering Marcus about in the kitchen! And Esca being such a gourmand, too. :) This was so sweet, and I especially liked when Marcus makes dinner for Esca at the end and the deliciously hot sex that follows.

[aquila_star]

Thank you so much. :) I love Esca bossing him around, it's right from canon, lol. :)

Thanks.