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[aquatic_sitar]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?

Am I doing it wrong? Do you have questions or concerns? Let me know here!

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[anonymous]

While I'm really impressed that you're exploring the more Nobody-ish side of this character (which is really rare, so big kudos for that!), there are a few things that confused me a little bit about how he interacts with other characters.

This may just be a discrepancy in interpretations so feel free to kick this anon in the head if I'm way offbase.

I never saw Demyx as one of the blander Nobodies. Lazy yes. Pure deadpan with the occasional splash of holier-than-thou sarcasm no. I'm not seeing any of his whiny, semi-optimistic, derpy, cowardly screw-up characteristics either. To be honest I'm not seeing much of anything as far as personality. Every one of his posts are utterly devoid of his characteristics except for when he recently asked if there was a music store.

Just a bit of well-meaning concrit <3<3

[aquatic_sitar]

He's actually been traveling only because of the chance of finding a music store, but I totally hear you.

Since the beginning, I've been struggling with how much Demyx would actually be acting. I imagine you'll be seeing more of those traits now that he's been around a month and is more familiar with the other people here. My reasoning was that he didn't know any of the people, really, wasn't around them every day like he was with the Org, and so he wasn't entirely sure how to act. I probably did take it a bit too far, but I'm fairly certain it will be rectified now that he's more sure of how to act with certain people.

tl;dr I think too much about Nobody motivation or something.

Thank you for the crit! I really do appreciate it. :)

[aquatic_sitar]

Oh, and as a bit of extra; Demyx got an Onix purely because he didn't want to walk everywhere without having portals, re: laziness. P: Which he has been using whenever possible, even if I haven't mentioned it ICly.