A Canopy of Green Chapter 5

May 04, 2007 19:20

Here is Chapter 5 ...

Title: A Canopy of Green
Chapter: Five
Author: Aquaseamage
Rating: PG
Characters: Elizabeth, Norrington, Governor Swann, Gillette and Groves
Pairing: Elizabeth/Norrington
Genre: Man vs Nature, Adventure, Romance
Status: In progress
Word Count: 3,800
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: The characters are not mine. They belong to Disney or whoever ( Read more... )

fanfic, potc, norribeth, exploring jamaica

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artic_fox May 5 2007, 01:26:31 UTC
LOL, I love poor James being so bewildered by her legs. And now he's going to be in trouble because of the horse! Enjoying this very much! He's so very restrained! :D

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aquaseamage May 5 2007, 19:57:22 UTC
Well, of course he's restrained. He's a proper gentleman, yes? It wouldn't do to have him ravish her in the forest!

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artic_fox May 6 2007, 01:46:00 UTC
LOL, I wouldn't mind. My latest fic has him ravishing her anyway. I just can't help myself!

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divia1431 May 5 2007, 01:56:27 UTC
"...and was that part of her thigh up there?"

:D

Loved it. And I do like the touch about the legs. So scandlous!

keep it up!

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aquaseamage May 5 2007, 19:59:10 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it. Such things were very scandalous in those days. What would James think if he saw modern woman at the beach in bikinis?! *faints*

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wicked_jade May 5 2007, 01:58:11 UTC
Poor, clueless James. He really needs to stop underestimating Elizabeth, lol.

And Elizabeth is so right about the men and clothes thing. They're utterly hopeless at telling the difference.

Lovely chapter as always!

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aquaseamage May 5 2007, 20:05:19 UTC
You'll be glad to know I thought up some good stuff for their second date! It should proove just as exciting as the first and leave James confused as to *why do all my dates with Elizabeth turn into disasters* and Elizabeth will say *how exciting!* ... hee-hee.

Glad you enjoyed the new chapter. Not much happened in it really. Well, we did learn Elizabeth is more crooked than James of course. Think she'll be a bad influence on him? lol

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lizzie_sparrow May 5 2007, 03:27:28 UTC
I am so happy you got this chapter posted tonight. =]

Lordy, James just has one problem after another, doesn't he? I have faith everything will go okay...

I can't wait for the next update.

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aquaseamage May 5 2007, 20:10:15 UTC
Yes, James does have one problem after another. Without the problems there will be no story and we wouldn't learn about Jamaica would we?

I'll try to get the next chapter up tomorrow. I didn't have as much time to write today as I had hoped as I had to run errands. :( But the good news is the next story with James & Elizabeth's second date will be called "A Pirate's Life For Me". And yes, there is a clue in the title as to the contents. You're the first to know, so enjoy. :)

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ericadawn16 May 5 2007, 04:32:42 UTC
Hehe, it was like a Coupling moment there. I could picture him looking shocked and Jeff appearing out of nowhere, "Legs, James! Legs!"

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aquaseamage May 5 2007, 20:12:30 UTC
Well, I did watch season 4 of Coupling... maybe I put the moment in there without realizing it. Glad you enjoyed it.

We didn't chat for awhile. Where have you been?

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