Fragile Essence, Chapter Three

[aquariuslover]

Fragile Essence
Chapter Three
Author: Aquariuslover
Pairings: Yunho, Jaejoong
Rating: R
Genre: Romance, Angst, AU
Length: Chaptered
Beta: tahoeturquoise

Summary: Jaejoong, the half Korean child nobody wanted, and Yunho, the beloved golden son of a town, form an unlikely bond; one that is forever evolving through the passing years as it is repeatedly tested by love,

Comments

[casshawol505]

SPOT! I AM NINJA!

[aquariuslover]

Bows to the ninja....wow.

[casshawol505]

why do you do this to me? I was already going emoshinki and this just made me cry and T_T but no ok, from the beginning
yunho is such a tease. without meaning to be of course, but come on, he comes into the hospital and pushes jae onto a cot and later he's all wrapped around jae and is hard and thrusting into him and guhh yunho, why do you make this so hard for the two of you
ok the part with the girl... lol... I can see that happening irl... cept it would be yun trying to make jae jealous or something
and YUNHO, STOP BEING MEAN TO JAE, OK? STOP IT. JUST ACCEPT HIM. YES HE LIKES TO COOK AND BE GIRLY AND STUFF AND YOU'RE GOING TO LOVE THAT ABOUT HIM. HE'S GOING TO MAKE YOU YUMMY FOOD
the ending.... I can't, ok? I just can't. don't do this to me ;_;
my guess is that yun's mom doesn't actually care but his dad does. something like that. I dunno, yo, BUT DON'T LEAVE JAE ALL ALONE. HE'S NOT MADE TO BE THAT WAY. HE'S A VERY FRAGILE HUMAN BEING AND HE DOESN'T DO WELL LIKE THAT

[aquariuslover]

I am so glad you mentioned the hospital scene, not many did. I thought it really showed Yunho being very attached/needy but obliviously so for Jaejoong...and the visiting lady catching on to it, and Jaejoong quickly covering. Well, I wanted it to show that.lol

Thank you bunches for your comment!

[frachy22]

spot

[kameleont2]

Oh No! No! I were supposed to comment first!

[frachy22]

Better luck next time, Kameleont!

You truly are the master of balance. Having all your readers laugh their asses of in one moment, then cry their hearts out the other.

Respect!

This is life. Life is about balance, not weighing too much on one side, but keeping a steady line with just absoluteley everything.

[chibi_jae]

Spot! Not quite ninja-level though haha

[chibi_jae]

My heart literally broke for litte Jaejoong in this chapter. Yunho's obliviousness is truly a talent in itself. For all his complaints about Jaejoong's 'girlyness' he sure got angry quickly when Jim propositioned him!

Thank you for sharing yet another wonderful chapter, I look forward to the next!

[aquariuslover]

You were very ninja-like...it's just that she's psychic about when I am going to update. lol

Yunho did appear jealous didn't he? lol

Thanks for commenting!

[romanticparis]

SPOT

[romanticparis]

While I was waiting for you to update, I was rereading Expectation All Our Lives part 3 and there is a part where Jae was inside this family house and he was cooking and changmin is calling him mama. It's fragile essence right? Yesyesyes?? If it is the same thing, that means that Jae and yunho wouldn't be together for awhile. I'm ok with that actually. I love how the story is progressing. :)

Anyway, Yunho in this chapter is kind of mean to Jae, which I can totally understand because that's how pretty much boys act. They find anything girly repulsive. haha

^This is one of the million things I love about your stories-the way you make the characters believable. :)Cocky/Jealous!Yunho is also so cute and funny!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Happy Thanksgiving! :D

[aquariuslover]

Yes, that was a glimpse of Fragile Essence. But remember in that glimpse...Jaejoong never read Yunho's mind. We just know what the kids though.;)

Yunho is all boy, that is for sure. He does have a weakness for Jaejoong though.

Thank you so much for commenting! I had a nice Thanksgiving...it just came two days late. lol

[sashii09]

SPOTTTT

[sashii09]

This Yunho is infatuated with Jae...maybe he is not aware of it? But I love how these teenage!yunjae's friendship's going <33 With Yunho being too mean and too sweet at the same time.. <3 OMG I approve so much!

I wonder how he'll react if he'll find out that jae is gay/likes him. OTL

“You are wrong, Ms. Kimble,” Yunho informed her as he walked over to Jaejoong and pulled him free of his mother. “We will always be friends and if I have to go to a stupid music show to prove it, I will.”
YEAH PROVE IT, JUNG XD

I hope Mrs. Jung won't hate Jae.. or I hope Jae's wrong with what he assumed that Mrs. Jung heard him T_T

Jealous teenage yunhoooo~! dhadjsk <33

This is amazing. ok. waiting for the next update!

[aquariuslover]

I am so glad you approve of Yunho in this story. He isn't perfect by a mile. He has some really doggy moments, but he is far from bad too. This young Yunho is one of my favorite Yunho's to write.

Hmmm...I am sure you will find this out someday.:)

You quoted, I love quotes.

I'm happy you are enjoying the story! Thanks for commenting!