Fragile Essence, Chapter One

[aquariuslover]

Fragile Essence
Chapter:  One
Author: Aquariuslover
Pairings: Yunho, Jaejoong
Rating: R
Genre: Romance, Angst, AU
Length: Chaptered
Beta: tahoeturquoise

Summary: Jaejoong, the half Korean child nobody wanted, and Yunho, the beloved golden son of a town, form an unlikely bond; one that is forever evolving through the passing years as it is repeatedly tested by love, loss

Comments

[wake_up_my_soul]

Yayz! Am I first!?

[wake_up_my_soul]

Hells yea I am! Okay I gotta go to work ><. So I will comeback and read/comment laters ^^.

[wake_up_my_soul]

Poor Jaejoong ㅠ.ㅠ to be that young and know your not wanted or loved by your own mom, and grandmother. I'm glad the Jungs are there to show him love and that he is worth/deserves love. Yunho is such a smartass *^^*. I can't wait to read more!

[aquariuslover]

Yunho is indeed a smartass...his parents....God bless them. lol

Thanks!

[aquariuslover]

Yeah~!!!

I am glad you like it!

[ligerliger]

Spot \o/

[ligerliger]

Awwww this is so cute :3 I really like this fic so far, it's sweet ^^ Yunho is so adorable when it comes to Jae lol ♥
and I feel like I had the biggest epiphany ever because your Spock in Expectations was Jaejoong.... I NEVER MADE THAT CONNECTION LMAO oh well but yeah everything makes sense now sOB

[aquariuslover]

I am glad you think it is cute and sweet.:)

Both Jaejoong and Changmin have Spock qualities. Jaejoong with the bonding and telepathic abilities.......although Jaejoong's are a million times better. lol I expanded on those buggers up..and changed almost everything. lol

Changmin with all the brains. Spock is Changmin's hero. He did dress up like him. lol

Although I think I have always shipped Spock and Kirk...even in those old reruns...if not romantically then as the best friends ever!

Thank you!

[ligerliger]

Right, I figured Changmin had the intelligence from Spock lool awesome \o/

Haha, really? I came to the conclusion that you did XD

You're welcome! ^^ and thank you too!

[sly_heiress]

MINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[sly_heiress]

Childhood best friends and soon to be sweethearts~ La la la~
First chapter down and I am already hooked!
Thank you for deciding to write another YJ story. And just so you know... I do read Expectations but I decided to be a troll and not comment. :P

I love you~ heheheh
-Your biggest troll

[aquariuslover]

I am glad you are hooked!

Remember no trolling this time if you like it. If it bores you feel free to troll. lol

We are going to agree to not discuss Expectations because you are in the dog house with Expectations. lol

Love you...even if you are a troll. lol

Thank you for commenting!

[sashii09]

spot

[sashii09]

fhjdhfjkahfka SO FLUFFEH KID!YUNJAE :D Haha! Glad that Jae found somebody who wants him. Yunho is such a sweet boy, and talks too much (in a very good way). I love how you put Star Trek in there captain and scientist huh? :D

Looking forward to the next chapter. :D

“Yunho, are you walking your girlfriend home?” A mouthy sixth grader that Yunho had beaten in basketball a week earlier yelled from the other side of the street.
Huh, I thought Yunho had a girlfriend at that age. Then after reading lmao it was actually JJ he was talking about xD protective Yunho = i approve :D

YEAH yunho have all kinds of balls JJ XD

and i love the part where jae slept with yunho <3 waiting~

[aquariuslover]

I can not resist including a little Star Trek...with the Expectations connection...it was too cheesy to resist.

I love protective Yunho~! Glad you liked cuddly sweet, innocent Yunjae.

Thank you!