A haiku, updates to come soon

[aquarius_galuxy]

I miss you like the
cherry tree shedding white tears
when spring fades away.

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Not technically correct since the sakura blossoms are shed after early spring.

Comments

[aizakura]

ooh, I likes! (:
uh particularly the last two lines

it kind of sounds like a sentence you broke up XD

the silent forest
sunlight through the canopy
a little frog leaps!

[aquarius_galuxy]

Yay finally someone likes it! =B

my poems are always broken up sentences XD

yay little frog!!