Comments | aqua_zephyrus: Fic :: Rain (Hotch/Reid, R)

aqua_zephyrus

Fic :: Rain (Hotch/Reid, R)

Sep 06, 2011 15:25

Title: Rain
Author: aqua_zephyrus (Shiny-sama)
Pairing/Characters: Hotch/Reid, Jack (Criminal Minds)
Rating: R
Warning: Fluff. Angst. Language.
Word count: 758
Beta: None.
Spoiler: None.
Disclaimer: FICTION

Summary: At some point, it was going to blow up in their face.

Author’s Notes: The first of (hopefully) many things to come. Written for the 25 drabble challenge to ( Read more... )

character: spencer reid, hotch/reid, character: aaron hotchner, fan fiction, slash, fandom: criminal minds

Comments 8

backtothelight September 6 2011, 23:57:59 UTC

Very nicely done, and it captures the emotions well. Thank you so much for sharing. (:

aqua_zephyrus September 7 2011, 03:06:01 UTC

Thanks, hun. <3 I was a little wee worried about this, what with Reid telling and all. But I figured it was time for a turnaround of sorts, y'know?

lucianwolf September 7 2011, 02:12:47 UTC

It is really neat to see a fight between these two that isn't because of a ridiculous miscommunication. It's also nice to see a fight that's as idiotic as they always seem to be. :)

aqua_zephyrus September 7 2011, 03:07:47 UTC

<3 I try to like... think about the not-so-cliche that could happen between them, y'know? Sometimes, it works. Sometimes, it doesn't. I think it did work this time.

Thanks kindly for the words!

bowie28 September 13 2011, 02:34:51 UTC

I got teary eyes, woman. Thank you!
This was sweet. I love when it's a good fight.

aqua_zephyrus September 13 2011, 02:49:06 UTC

I love it too. Sadly, I dig around, and they argue about frivolous things sometimes. It's not... serious accusations like this. So I figured WHY NOT.

<33 But thanks! Seriously. :D Coming from you Iiii feel so happy it's good.

kuriadalmatia October 18 2011, 03:11:02 UTC

It can be the smallest of things that lead down the path of the most destructive arguments. I've had them myself ... what starts off as bitching over the butter dish turns into the "why are we with each other" ferociousness.

And I can see Reid kicking Aaron's ego a bit over sulking in the rain, his indignation over the "bad father" accusation given Reid's upbringing.

All this gushing to say very well done. Thanks for sharing.

And your artist is amazing.

aqua_zephyrus October 18 2011, 14:10:02 UTC

<33 Your ego stroking is going to be the death of me in a really good way.

Thank YOU for the comment. I kind of enjoy assertive Reid a lot, and well... him being like that to Hotch makes me smile in all sorts of ways. Figured I'd write it like that. :3 But really. Thank you so much for the nice words. You really know how to make someone proud of their work.