Fic: A Universal Concept - Chapter 13

[aprilraven]

Title: A Universal Concept - Chapter 13

Comments

[quidamling]

Ahh. This is amazing. The Very Sue is dead on, and to see her not get every character fawning over her is... ngl... a hilarious twist. XD

Oh, Ratchet, what are you getting into now?

Guh, I could keep quoting, but then I would sound like a moron. XD

*snugs* Can't wait to see how everything plays out with this. Even if it takes some gentle or not-so-gentle prodding. >3

[aprilraven]

Omg, keep prodding, keep prodding! I'm convinced this is the only way fic will get done. :3

Your comments are so much appreciated, as always, hun, and thank you for all your help. *snugs* <333

[aprilraven]

XDD That part was hilarious to write, ngl. Thank you, hun! *hugs!* <333

[mmouse15]

So much to love in this chapter! Jazz and Maggie (finally) and Ironhide's Guardian is awesome, and I really want to kick Ratchet and Prime in the afts or lock them in a closet or SOMETHING to get them moving in the proper direction!

Also, your Sue was hilarious and spot on.

I wonder what's going to happen to Barricade? I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

[aprilraven]

Jazz and Maggie are yes, finally getting there. Slow buildup, they've got it. ;)

Aww, thank you! Ironhide is hands down my favorite to write. ♥

Prime and Ratchet, they really do need something (or someone?) to take a clue by four to their helms, and Barricade has some interesting times ahead, definitely. xD

Thank you for reading, your comments are love and very much appreciated! <3

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[ext_210694]

Still feeling far too sorry for Barricade... possibly less for being at the edge of starvation than for dealing with Amethyst/Moonbeam/whateverthefuck her name is. (Helloooo, Sue!) Can't wait to see how he and Mikaela manage to hook up.

Hee, Prime's bootycallFAIL.... Really want to see how this plays out, but good for Ratchet for putting the kibosh on a relationship that seems to be going nowhere.

Maggie and Jazz remain completely awesome and adorable. And Ironhide's relationship with the Lennoxes seems to be slowly shifting in the right direction.

Really enjoying this!

[aprilraven]

The Sue was entirely too much fun to write. >3 Thank you for reading! :)