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aprilraven

FIC: A Universal Concept - Chapter Eight

Sep 08, 2010 18:37

Title: A Universal Concept ( Read more... )

ironhide/sarah lennox/will lennox, 2007 movie, rated m, bumblebee/sam, au, barricade/mikaela, a universal concept, optimus prime/ratchet, fanfiction, jazz/maggie, mech/human, transformers

Comments 12

cazcatharsis September 9 2010, 01:08:47 UTC

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

aprilraven September 9 2010, 02:55:23 UTC

^____^ ♥♥♥

mdnytryder September 9 2010, 03:28:47 UTC

Go Maggie! Rawr.

aprilraven September 10 2010, 02:53:37 UTC

*giggles* ^___^

cyclonedancer September 9 2010, 03:58:23 UTC

Yeah!! *Squeals like the rabid fan-girl I am* I love this story, soooooooooooooooo glad to see the new chapter.

aprilraven September 10 2010, 02:55:05 UTC

d'awwww, thank you~ ^___^

artemis10002000 September 9 2010, 13:29:33 UTC

*double squee for robots and Time Lords*

Love it! Lennox broke my heart and Jazz and Maggie, they're so beautiful! They made me melt into a puddle of blissful goo.

aprilraven September 10 2010, 02:56:49 UTC

Eeee, Robots and Time Lords! \o/

Thank you so much, hun! Glad you liked it. <3

ext_210694 September 20 2010, 02:32:08 UTC

Just ran across this, and I'm really intrigued! Love how you're slowly dropping hints about the different relationships (and secrets) driving the various characters.

And damn but you made me feel sorry for Barricade there... Nice job! (And sort of relieved about Will -- it's not his choice exactly to be so distant and secretive with Sarah and Ironhide.)

Looking forward to more!

aprilraven September 23 2010, 18:31:25 UTC

Thank you so much for your lovely review! It's nice to hear that the slow buildup is appreciated, and that Barricade is believably sympathetic. And yes to Will, too. He doesn't figure largely in this, but I love the man too much to entirely write him out. ♥

Thanks again, glad you're enjoying it! ^__^