baekchen; Breathless (with a hint of hysteria) [3/3]

[aprilclash]

Title: Breathless (with a hint of hysteria)
Pairing/Focus: jongdae/baekhyun, OT4 (chanyeol/kyungsoo, hints of chanyeol/baekhyun/jongdae and baekhyun/kyungsoo)
Rating: R
Warnings: fluff, kids hanging from chandeliers, mentions of sex not in front of the children
Length: 21000~
Disclaimer: EXO members and/or former members do not belong to me
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Comments

[design_ok]

This was really enjoyable read during windy winter nights, I like how it feels "real" - i totally imagine chingus as babysitters and maknae line being adorable bratty kids - soooooooo cute ;w;

the story progression, how you left bits of their past here & there, how emotions seeped through from Baekhyun's perspective - it all touched the right places in my heart, you know? it was moving and made you feel for the characters (remember that talk about resemblance with Baek ;w

[aprilclash]

your praise is the best praise a baekhyun fan could ever receive and i'll never stop repeating it /hugs/ thank you ♥

[kouyou_x3]

this was utterly perfect and squeezed my heart in so many ways that I really don't have words for it.
From part 1 till 3 i was so hooked and my heart was like completely absorbed liek it constricted every 2 seconds cuz there was always one who was suffering and I could feel it so well? (Sorry bad english lololol)
Like i could totally understand and felt their pain as my own. And then it got even more and more complicated but at the same time it wa so damn realistic and just... wow
Thank you for this. Im happy it had a happy ending :)
All the love for Chenbaek TT and chansoo :)

[aprilclash]

thank you ;; it means a lot to me since i was so unsure writing baekchen for the first time but i'm glad it turned out well ♥

[lazyscrawls]

this is such a lovely story
like the characterisation was amazing and the humour is spot on
the flow was so fantastic
the way you manage to weave the past into present without making it forced
and BAEK the heartbreaker oblivious little shit omg
and long-suffering kyungsoo I cry

thank you for writing this it's really great im so happy i read it omg

[aprilclash]

/beams as happily as she can/

i'm so glad you liked it, thank you so much for reading <3

[hespify]

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[aprilclash]

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